LMonroe

Caden sat beside me, his head tilted against the windowpane, eyes closed. His duffel bag was stowed in the rack above us. -It feels rather odd that he would call ...

“Come now children, don’t run from me. All I did was give you a home!” Circe cried out. Emberlynn and Juniper had lost sight of Alexis, but that it was ...

Since I haven't read any of the other parts, I am going to review this based on the context in this little excerpt. If I ask a question or make ...

Valerian bit his finger, his eyes nervously looking off into the distance as though he didn’t want to say it. Poppy didn’t comment on it , for she knew what ...

Twilight stood in a bathroom stall, looking through the crack of the closed door as she waited for Melanie. She had already ate lunch, so there was nothing else to ...

He didn't look back once. He just kept walking, his hand compulsively tapping his pocket as if checking for a heartbeat. -I really like the picture you're creating here, and ...

Hello again, Since this is extremely short, I don't have really any specific edits to give but rather a couple of generalized suggestions. Feel free to take what you will ...

Candy Necklace hugged his arms to his chest as he walked through out the woods. The many trees made it feel more like the forest than the woods, but either ...

Hello and good afternoon. I notice that this is just one part to a story you're writing and as I haven't read the previous parts I am going to try ...

Highlighting the cast list is my favorite part of a new show. Green for my close friends, orange for people I'm vaguely acquainted with, and blue for newbies, people I've ...

Dearest Albion, The news that I have received as of late, including that state of yours, has been concerning me as well as your daughter. Taking care of her may ...

As drums of dawn assault my bloodshot eyes, The morning cold persuades them toward a truce. If this is supposed to be one sentence then I would not capitalize the ...