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I have posted the longer version.

Thank you! i have written the longer version in my journal and have editted a little bit. i will be posting it soon!

oh! okay thank you for the explanation.

thank you for this review also! when I wrote this poem I wanted it to have a ton of variety to which a lot of people could relate, and I'm ...

Thank you! i can see how the title might of let you think it was something else. yes it is about how me and my friend both view each other ...

thank you!

thank you for the review! i get what your saying, this was just a short poem i wrote whiel i was going through something and had writers block but i ...

Thank you! for the review. i always love to hear feed back from people to hear their thoughts and that they like my work.

Thank you!

hello! I really like how in this poem that it has edits of you changing some of the words. I feel like by doing this it somewhat changed the meaning ...

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This is really good I love how the first part is a younger person wanting to be older, and the second part is an older person wanting to be younger. ...

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This is really good I love how the first part is a younger person wanting to be older, and the second part is an older person wanting to be younger. ...

I'm so sorry for writing to I forgot to hit it is a review and I don't know how to delete the first one.

Hello! I was looking for some poetry to read and I found this. It's really good I love the repetition, it really adds to the affect. I also love how ...

this is so good it captures the thoughts before trying to commit really well I also love how we can read the voices as well and that they're easy to ...