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Thank you! yes it is a personal poem and is for my brother. I'm glad you liked it and liked how your're still left with questions.

Thank you! i will edit it.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the longer version!

Thank you! I understand what your're saying but I don't know what a penultimate line is. I am thinking bout adding slightly more detail to make more sense of why ...

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Thank you! I realize the title looks deceiving but it was the only one I could think of. I also like the way you saw the importance of friendship in ...

Thank you! I some times rush while writing and I also did not know it should be a semi-colon.

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Thank you! i always love seeing your reviews! i did not know that there was supposed to be a space.

Thank you for the review!

Thank you! I love to look at reviews so I can find ways to improve. Yes you are right I did not mean to capitalize tag I just get confused ...

Thank you this review too! I didn't format it as verses because it was originally just a letter to my friend in the form of somewhat a poem. thats also ...

Thank you! I'm definitely thinking about adding some more things since had a few people who really like it and thinks it has more potentional.

Thank you! yes when I wrote this I was writing to be like the wounds you get growing up and the different wounds you get. I wanted to give the ...

I have posted the longer version