Kyladoot

I really like it a lot. Maybe put the first stanza last, so the descriptions build, and lead up to the realization that this is all about rain?

repeating "how could you? really places emphasis on it. It's really strong. I like the last stanza a lot. What if you put it first?

I like it, it really conveys the feeling. However, I'd like some concrete images, or especially similes/metaphors.

If I were you, I'd try rearranging the stanzas. At the moment you have it set up 1, 2, 3,... but I think 3, 2, 1 might sound really good. ...

I like the simplicity, but describing spring as green and winter as snowy seems a little cleshe. I really do like it though. Maybe if you thought of a few ...

There needs to be concrete imagery. Tangible sounds, images, feelings. It's good, but it feels too general without specific images.

The one part that I really liked was "eyes closing to the soft sounds". I like it when people mix sensory images like that.

In poetry, I really like it when people are really specific. And while you might get a certain image for God, others, like me, don't. I'd like a line or ...