Kwantack

Incredible. I think it's really strong and clear and well thought-out. The stanzas look really good and you did very well with this. I'm not sure why but I can't ...

Wow, imagery was fantastic. The first line is really good, by the way, as is the title. I think you did a really good job with writing this. The lines ...

I was smiling by the first line. Lil'!!!! Awesome word. I think this poem is really cute and well done. I loved it so much I don't really know what ...

This is really cool--I enjoyed it a lot. Vocabulary is good, but I think you mean "Evil's" instead of "Evils" in line 5. I think if you added punctuation it ...

Hmm...this is very unique. One thing would be to capatalize all i's when they should be I's. Also, capatalizing the beginning of each line would make its appearance look cleaner. ...

This is excellent!! Yeah, I would definetely change saw to seen or whatever. That seems to be the only problem with it. I can tell that you put a lot ...

Hey, the first thing I noticed about this was the awesome flow. Well done with that!!!! I also think the vocabulary is good. Because the others did a nice job ...

This was beautiful. I have to tell you the reason I clicked on this: I'm in the process of writing a trilogy (or trying to, at least) and I always ...

I think you properly used short lines without making the poem sound like BLEH!! (That probably doesn't make any sense...sorry) Also, I thought this was truly well done. I'm not ...

The flow is very well done!! But I can't help but wonder why the rhyme scheme in the first stanza is different from all the other three. You may considerer ...

The flow of this poem to me is very well done. This has a very interesting feeling to it. You may, perhaps, want to make all beginnings of lines capatalized. ...

This is very interesting--I loved it! It has so many different emotions in it. You're really good at poetry. The italics are wonderful too. I guess I never thought much ...

Hey, I think this is really cool. The other people gave good comments so all I can really say is I enjoyed reading this and good job with putting the ...

Polishing this up a little would be great, but I think it holds an interesting feeling in it. I don't really know what to say, but this was pretty well ...

The other person did a nice job reviewing this so I don't have a lot to say, but this was really good. I love how it doesn't fall under any ...