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  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: If She Were Real

    Hey there KrystaG here, I am going to review your piece!(: First off, I would cut my wrist until I was dead. This is only because I have gone through ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: Charles Prolouge

    Thanks for the help. This was kind of a rough draft. I thought I put in there James slept with me because I could hardly hear him from his room. ...

    Jul 20, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: Charles Prolouge

    This sucks, It wont show paragraphs.

    Jul 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: He was the Past, You're my Future

    I liked the way you compared them to real life objects. That was interesting. I am very confused as to why you are nasty. And if he is not yours ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: My Ghost

    This is so great. It sort of gave me chills because it reminded me of when my father passed away. Anyways I loved it. I wish I was so poetic ...

    Apr 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love Is Like Math

    I love that you used two completely opposite things and compared them. I would have never thought of the idea to use math and love as an equal. That's very ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Hope Against All Reason

    This wasvm very sweet

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Hope Against All Reason

    This was very sweet

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: A Rapist's Note.

    I absolutely love the details

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: A Rapist's Note.

    I absolutely love the details

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Its a boy!

    I don't see it. sorry I'm new to this stuff. I have always wanted to be a writer but I just can't seem to win.

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Its a boy!

    Oh shoot It didn't put the rest! Is there a way to fix this?

    Mar 14, 2013


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— Noam Chomsky