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I think it's funny how everyone says that it reminds them of Taylor Swift even though then only thing in common is the title. It isn't even the same storyline!! ...

Very cute. It's so adorable. A few technical aspects that need analyzing... -In one of the lines you said cutious. I believe you meant curtious, which would make it just ...

This was a really inspring piece. It's very thoughtful. It's true, that kids growing up today are more encouraged to sit down in front of the TV then to play ...

This is really great work!! Most of the poetry in this section is rather depressing, it's refreshing to read soemthing that's all about love. :) One thing that REALLY bugged ...

Good work - very thoughtful and enjoyable. What drives me nuts, though, is that you didn't stick with the format in the third stanza that you established in the first ...

I really like this poem. Without further explanation, I will have to assume that Mute is a child who has recently been blinded. I can also assume that they are ...

This is really a great poem. You have incredible technique - rhyme, rhythm, stuff like that. There are a few things I can confused on, though. At the end, you ...

How cute. I love it. It's adorable, really. An older sister commenting on her little sister growing up, no? I always admire poets and writers who can communicate a message ...

This is a really good piece, and finding inspiration in another writer's work is always a good trait to have, especially for a young budding writer. Just one thing - ...

Haha. Please record this and send it to me - it's kickass. I have to add, because I swear half of me is a perfectionist OCD freak, that there is ...

This is an intriguing poem. It's interesting how you love the person, yet you see all the flaws, you accuse them of being selfish, vulgar, etc. It makes you wonder ...

You have an innate ability for rhythm, technique, and rhyme. While your story has no names or specifics you manage to create a vivid picture with the reader's imagination. You ...

This reminds me of the part in The Chronicles of Narnia where Aslan appears and takes the dragon skin off of Edwin (is that what his name is? The mean ...

This is a moving and heartfelt poem because it happens to every girl where they feel like everyone is judging them based on what they look like, and every girl ...

If this is off the top of your head, I am greatly impressed. While the actual identity of "The Tapers" isn't specified, it adds to the mystery, the fear, the ...