Konijn

No problem! I make stupid mistakes all the time... ;)

Thanks! This really helps with my writing! Hopefully I will do better on my grammar next time... ;)

Thanks for the review! (btw. I did sorta do that last part to purposely quote Frozen.) ;)

Thanks! I've never been super great on the commas and periods when someone is talking, so this really helps!

Hmm... I think I will, in fact, go into more detail. Thanks for the suggestion!

Wow! You are a great help. The reason I left it the way I did, so indescriptive, was to let others minds wander, to let them flow to their own ...

no problem!

Thanks for your opinion!

You are insane.

thanks for the review

No problem! It was brilliant!

Thanks so much for answering my questions! You're a really great writer!

No problem! It was really good! :)

Welcome to YWS! And I love poems. They are really expressive and nice to read.

Yes, part of me wrote this because I was in the middle of an emotional breakdown and just needed to vent something, and I was just really sad. Though I'm ...