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KnightlyAngel09

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Music of Dusk

    This is great. Sonnets are really hard in my opinion. And you did a brilliant job. The rhythm was great, choice of words was also awesome. You paint a really ...

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Vulnerable

    Hey. I just wanted to thank everyone who reviewed. 8) MARAMING SALAMAT.:) (translation: Thank you very much.

    Jan 8, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Vulnerable

    Oh dear. I must seem like a sad being. No. I did not mean to give out the idea that I am a prisoner in an absolutely unforgiving world. Think ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In the Light Of.

    MARAMING SALAMAT.:) ( That means thank you very much in Filipino.XD) Thank you to the title suggestion. I like it but as of the moment, I have no time to ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Rant About How Stephenie Meyer Annoys Me

    Hear, hear! Couldn't agree more. More power to you and may the brainwashed world of giggling teenage girls be saved by your rant.

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Marble Statue

    Ah yes. I cannot punctuate even if my life depended on it. Thank you very much for that.:)

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Marble Statue

    yes. The last line was my problem on my first draft as well. But at the moment I couldn't find a way to edit it and still end the way ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Marble Statue

    Well, no. It isn't about Pygmalion. I didn't have mythology in mind when I wrote this but come to think of it, it sounds like it was based on Pygmalion. ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Doll

    Lovely, but your rhyming is a little off in some stanzas but despite that I think the poem still flowed perfectly. It was a great read.:)

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Sonnet on Life

    Thanks to Suzanne for that. I just wanted to try my hand on a *Sonnet* (a non iambic pentameter sonnet{not a sonnet]) for a bit. Perhaps I should try writing ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hope For The Hopeless

    I think it was great. But the very end, as in the last line seemed out of place to me. Anyway, I think you expressed your emotions and art at ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Imagination.

    alright. thank you. I shall be reviewing stuff.:)

    Dec 27, 2008


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