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Re: Universe of Dreams
That was so good. Intensely so. Your description was amazing. I've seldom read anyone on this site who made such vivid pictures with prose. Your words were heavily descriptive yet ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Father Winter
I love it.:) It's a lovely poem that evokes the lonely feeling lots of people get during this season. Trees drip in diamond ice, The stars mimic their glitter. I ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women
It was really funny. I wasn't offended at all. You did say some bad stuff about women but it was self-deprecating. The recipe to a humorous piece. It was a ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Anorexia of the Soul
Hey there!:) I like your idea of 'Anorexia of the soul'. It's a good way to approach a hackneyed topic. There's also a lot of interpretations that can stem from ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Moving Forward
Hey.:) I'm Nixie.:) Welcome on the site. YAY first work! I shall review. (Hey I'm a new member and this is my first post on this site :]) I don’t ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Sparsile
Hi Jon!:) It's a really good poem. There's a simplicity and charm to your imagery but it's coupled with a heavy emotion. The quote below almost sounds as if a ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Scar-Kisses
Hey Pen.:) Hmm.. I do like this. It's something very contemporary and this probably would have been an anthem for me a couple of years ago. I think it's great ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: A Rose
Hey.:) Nice to meet ya. I'm Nixie. Oh, I love this poem. I've a thing for roses and for rhymes. This is a deviation from the 'sweet rose of love' ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: sad
Hello.:) Nice to meet ya. I'm Nixie by the way. Welcome here. You should really go on and try to review other people's works. It's an excellent way to meet ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Seventeen Years
Hey. I'm Nixie, nice to meet ya. Haha. I laughed aloud when I read your last line. Couldn't agree more. I really like this poem. It falls into the genre ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: I Would Sing to You
Hey.:) I love this. A smile made of cloudy daysBrought more syrup to my heartThan the chocolate-coated promisesThat had turned me into a diabetic. My favorite lines. Hmm... I've nothing ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: The Prince's Mistake
Hey.:) I won't even try to critique this. I love it too much. I'll only say that you should run it on spellcheck because there were some typos. oh, well ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: A Part Of Me
My friend, you have to make some reviews. It's site policy to review others' works before you post.:) Anyway, I'll try to help out with this one. This was very ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Suffering
Hey. First of all, I love you avatar. Penguins.
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Visions Only Dreamed
Hey. Well, hmm... I still think you're one of my favorite poets on here. This sounds almost like an anthem when I read it. There's a way you write that ...
Jan 18, 2010
