KittyCatMeow

The rhythm is great, and it easily flows. It's something I'm not that good at. Although, you should drop the italics. There's really not much need for them. Bleed, my ...

Hello! This is me again, the cat that does reviews for you, returning to review some more! ;) I'll be doing this stanza to stanza with most likely only one ...

This is interesting, and I haven't seen an original piece like this in quite a long time. Moving on. So here is my white flag, I physically can not fight ...

Hello, Jozue, I'm here to review your poem! The rhythm flows easily. The repetitive style that you chose for this poem is a huge boost that improved this poem. Also, ...

Hi! I'm here to review your work! Before I start, permit me to say that this is short, but beautiful (well-written too). Blue on its plummage like the blue in ...

Hi! I'm here yet again to review more work! I have to say that this could be rather "old" work, but I'll review it even so! In May the leaves ...

HELLO!!! I'm back with another practically useless brilliant review for you! Now, let me explain what I liked about this. I have to say that first, this was easy to ...

Hello! It's been a while since I wrote a review, so here I go! First of all, I'll have to say that you should add more rhythm and flow even ...

As I promised, I'm here to review part 3! Wish me luck, and I might not be so accurate. I must warn you! I need to yell at you. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

Hey! :D I'm here to review part 2 of your series. First of all, I think you really improved on this, now to get on with the review. I don't ...

This is beautiful. The only thing overall that I really would love for you to fix is that the poem is less connected. I said something like this in one ...

Hmm, this is interesting, short, and simple except nothing that exciting happened in the conclusion. A LITTLE more rhythm could help as well. She knew the limit was 45, (the ...

Hey. I'm reviewing for points to give gifts for Christmas in July! Firstly, you need more rhythm. Okay, onto more parts of the review. Today you died at ten past ...

I need more points for Christmas in July. Here's a review for that. Dear Anonymous, Your Secret Admirer, Unknown and other unnamed people, Only the first name makes sense. Otherwise, ...

Hi! I need more points for Christmas in July! You wanted to stare me down Hold me under Then watch me drown This needs more rhythm, and I'm rushing, so ...