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Re: The Killer.
Hello! I've seen you around before, and I'd like to review this beautiful (and deadly) poem of yours. May I begin? Nitpicks: 3rd stanza, first line. I think that "one" ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: A Piano Man
Hello! :3 Today, I'll be reviewing this poem of yours! Okay, to begin with, I feel as though some were uniquely longer or shorter than others. This sort of ruins ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Devil In My Dreams
Hello! I have arrived to give you a sweet review! (or I'll try anyway...) Let me begin, stanza to stanza. Nitpicks: 2nd stanza, 3rd line. There should be no apostrophe. ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful Love
Hello! This is me, Kitty (or Kit, whichever you want to call me... I AM A CAT) here to give you a beautiful review fit for royalty. Also, I recommend ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: When I need you, even just a second.
Hi, DreamWork! Do you know why I'm here? To review your work of course! ;) I'll be going stanza to stanza. ;) Keep me going, now! I need you even ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Dying to be Beautiful
Hi! I'm here to review your poem ^.^ Before I begin, I recommend periods and commas. Otherwise it seem either incomplete or it runs on. Either way, it's grammatically incorrect ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Broken Hearts
Hi there! I see that this looks like it yearns for a review by me, so here I am, about to give it to you. I'll go stanza to stanza ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Firefly
Short, yet sweet. Hello, and I'm just here to review your piece here. Like I already said, this poem is short, but it's full with deep meaning. There really isn't ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: First kiss
It was interesting. It was also... descriptive. Although, while I was reading this, I did feel as though I was reading a short story instead of a poem. This sounded ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Fade to Gray
Hello! I am here to defeat the Black Plague, but still, as a fellow Green Lantern member, I must help even my rivals by giving you a review. So here ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The True Monsters
Hello!! I'm here to review this poem of yours for the sake of my review team and for your wonderful poetic growth. Before I begin, I would like to say ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: I Hope...
Hello! I'm here to review your poem that I just found in the Green Room! Now firstly, I have to say, I'm glad this isn't one of those poems that ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: Fiona Frost - THE MELTING OF THE NORTH POLE
Hi! I'm here to review your piece! I realize it's short, but you honestly just wrote about Fiona waking up at 6:45. The next paragraph is all about memories, bla ...
Jul 30, 2013 -
Re: Shatter me, Break me
Hello! I am here to review your piece here. I'll review your work stanza by stanza, but before I begin, I think the genre should've been Romance. It is obviously ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Without You
Hello! I am here to review your piece of poetry! I am lost in a galaxy of shining constellations with a great cost I search for a realization of differences ...
Jul 28, 2013
