Kingofnate

Damn.

This is a great review! I think it may be a bit easier to decipher, knowing that the focal point of the piece is not janice, but La Pantera. (And ...

Thanks so much for this review, remmy! Pleasure to meet you, too. hope i'll see you around the site

Wow, callmeafreak, thank you for your review. It's an amazing feeling when someone tells you your writing hit them on a personal level. I just thought you'd like to know, ...

Thanks so much! be sure to shoot me a message anytime you want an extra review on a piece or two!

Yeah, thats the worst, huh? Make sure you check the box that asks if this is a review

Go listen to hotel california, by the eagles. Maybe it will makemore sense:P

It's Hotel california, by the Eagles! Thanks for the review!

It would be like a "What the heck is this this is new" type of hold, im saying

Thank you! you always leave great reviews, super helpful. And i definitely need to change the whole clarke part, because clarke is a completely different guy than the Hispanic guy. ...

Thanks so much for your reviews! i submitted these pieces almost two weeks ago i think and i was beginning to lose faith. It's gonna be a long ride, and ...

IM SORRY I MADE AN ACCIDENTAL REVIEW AND GOT A BUNCH OF POINTS FOR IT

Woah, that escalated real quick. I thought i was reading some comedic stuff then you're talking about suicide. Anyways, i liked this, the repetition of the three verses. I'd just ...

Thanks, Pally! Those are some great points i didn't even think of. Much obliged! Chapter 2 should be up real soon, i just need to akwardly merge it with chapter ...

Really drew me in. Way to captivate your audience