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Sorry sweetheart, but I have a different version of what is helpful, grammar reviews are not helpful. Opinions on the characters and story are helpful. Repeatedly missing repeated details of ...
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: .
Boohoo, I don't want to hear it.
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: .
Grammar reviews are to be ignored.
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: .
I'm sorry but I think you missed the entire title of the story.
May 7, 2015 -
Re: The Grinch In Botany
I really liked this like Chrissy said, so perfect for the time of the year. Should show your Botany Teacher no?
Dec 12, 2014 -
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Ha, you can practically tell I'm dead tired as I was writing this.
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Lenny Law
I have no idea what I'm looking like.
Aug 24, 2014 -
Re: .
One of the problems is that I see things in flashes, so I usually have to piece the story together based on what I see.
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: .
Like I say with IamTraunt, patience I will explain everything in due time.
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: .
Patience all is explained in due time.
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: .
No, Jackson is supposed to be a sleeze bag and jerkoff he puts on that he's nice and caring. But as far as he cares Rafael was just some person ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: .
1st: I only tell two on purpose the third is a plot in a squeal story. 2nd: I believe you skipped the ENTIRE DIALOGUE between Rafael and his sister. Then ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: .
Wow I completely missed that... chit, that part was from a different way the fight ends. I thought I had picked all out buuut you know I suck at all ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: .
Sorry, I assumed everyone knew what it meant. X whatever number means repeat it however many times.
May 21, 2014 -
Re: .
I suggest you read part two at least because it makes a lot more sense if did so.
May 20, 2014
