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KingLucifer

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: .

    Sorry sweetheart, but I have a different version of what is helpful, grammar reviews are not helpful. Opinions on the characters and story are helpful. Repeatedly missing repeated details of ...

    Aug 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: .

    Boohoo, I don't want to hear it.

    Aug 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: .

    Grammar reviews are to be ignored.

    Aug 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: .

    I'm sorry but I think you missed the entire title of the story.

    May 7, 2015
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Humor Re: The Grinch In Botany

    I really liked this like Chrissy said, so perfect for the time of the year. Should show your Botany Teacher no?

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: .

    Ha, you can practically tell I'm dead tired as I was writing this.

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: Lenny Law

    I have no idea what I'm looking like.

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: .

    One of the problems is that I see things in flashes, so I usually have to piece the story together based on what I see.

    Jul 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: .

    Like I say with IamTraunt, patience I will explain everything in due time.

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: .

    Patience all is explained in due time.

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: .

    No, Jackson is supposed to be a sleeze bag and jerkoff he puts on that he's nice and caring. But as far as he cares Rafael was just some person ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: .

    1st: I only tell two on purpose the third is a plot in a squeal story. 2nd: I believe you skipped the ENTIRE DIALOGUE between Rafael and his sister. Then ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: .

    Wow I completely missed that... chit, that part was from a different way the fight ends. I thought I had picked all out buuut you know I suck at all ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: .

    Sorry, I assumed everyone knew what it meant. X whatever number means repeat it however many times.

    May 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: .

    I suggest you read part two at least because it makes a lot more sense if did so.

    May 20, 2014


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