KindlingDragonsFire

I never thought I'd like a story about a rat and a girl as much as I did. I never thought I'd say that sentence, either. Well done intro, to ...

Hi, Meg! Dragon here for a short REVIEW. Happy review day. A quick note, I haven't read all of your chapters, I'm only on chapter seven, but I hope this ...

Hi there, I'm Dragon, and I'm here to ask you a few questions as a sort-of-kind-of review. First off, I liked this concept, but it was a little confusing at ...

Hi Beyal! I'm Dragon, and I will be conducting a review today! First off, woah. That was a veritable roller-coaster of emotion. Like, geeze. I'm still reeling a little over ...

Hi, Zly! Dragon here for a review, short and sweet. Okay, to start off, I NEED MORE OF THIS. AUGH THIS CONCEPT IS PERFECT, THIS IS PERFECT, AND I NEED ...

Hi, Pasta! It's Dragon here for a critique. Hope you don't mind. Okay, to start, this didn't go how I expected, and I like that. I thought it'd be a ...

Hey hey, Moose here for a review. I'm a bit critical on spelling and grammar. I'm apologise in advance if I'm too harsh. Okay, to start, that title, oh my ...

Moose here, doing a very quick review. So this was pretty good. Short and sweet. It was a good execution, a good story, and I was pretty thrilled to read ...

Moose here to review. This starts out pretty good. Spelling is good, and I can visualise what's going on fairly well. :D Just a few nitpicks, though. “Kyle Finley is ...

Oh. My God. *Said the commenter as the tears streamed down her face* Geeze. I was going to do a review, but... this is so.... delicate. Wow. Jezebel. Okay, okay, ...

Moose here for a review. Jezebel. First off, this was pretty good, albeit intense. The story just keeps on coming, and the concept is quite interesting. Just a few nitpicks. ...

HAPPEH REVIEW DAY! Moose here for a review. This is pretty interesting- the name draws me in, since I've never heard of anything like it, and the names are pretty ...

Hi there! Moose here to do a quick review. First off, happy Review day! Woop, woop! Second of all, I like this. I'm really intrigued by what in the world ...

Hi, Moose here for a review, and- OH MY GOD WHAT JUST HAPPENED WHAT DID I JUST READ. AUGHHHHHHH!!!!! Oh, gloth. Oh, gloth. Augh... *hides head in crook of arm* ...

Moose here for a review! This is pretty good for a new chapter. Not much of an info dump, we're eased into it. Nice :) Spelling and such are pretty ...