Kevikur

Hey! It's awesome to see that you're active on this site again. Let me tell you, I really enjoyed reading this. I'm a huge fan psychological stories or movies. I ...

Wow! This chapter was extremely well done and amazingly written. I read the prologue and, being so incredibly enticed, came to read your first chapter. You really have a way ...

I liked that ending. Sassy with a capital S! Not only am I a huge gore fan, my dear friend, but I occasionally read romance. The whole situation was horribly ...

Hey again, Dragon! Another action-packed chapter you have here! Horror, gore, and a lot of death. All a perfect recipe for a greatly concocted story. That, combined with the fact ...

Hey Dragon! Congratulations on posting your first story, friend. You have a crazy plot here; it's chilling and makes me feel disturbed-- all in a good way. I'm slightly afraid ...

Welcome to YWS! It's awesome that you posted your first story here. I'm more than happy to give you a review. I like the plot that you that you have ...

I loved the closing you had on this! I thought it was extremely clever. We all have that one "creepy" friend, or maybe we are that friend. But you made ...

I did not expect that turn out at all! But you wrapped everything up nicely, answered all the questions I had, and left me extremely satisfied. I knew the rainbow ...

Whoooooooa! Your gory descriptions are incredible. You intice the reader and pull them into the very messed-up situation John is going through. I'm surprised that he was able to stomach ...

I adore this poem. It's a bit dark and rings true. We are the lamb who boarder lines evil and God. We are so easily evluened and will go to ...

I like where this is going! Arabella's sudden burst of anger and super strength made for some good action. I just have one question, though. Why did you put an ...

Hey Shailla! Before I go on to review your first chapter I swung by to read the prologue first. I'm usually weary about vampire stories, but I think you're onto ...

This has everything I ever need in a story: gore, horror, and a romantic gay couple. And it was amazing to log in and find out that you wrote it ...

Hello I'm Kev, and welcome to YWS! I find gang/mob ideas always catch my interest and you really took the idea out of the box to have the main character ...

I need to take a breath after reading this stunning piece-- in, out, in, out...okay, time to applaud you. There was so much emotion that was perfectly portrayed through each ...