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Kevikur

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: The Chasers - Chapter 2

    Another excellent chapter. I love to read detective novels. I think that genre is one of the hardest to write because you need to know enough about the law to ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: The Chasers - Prologue

    Wow! That was intense, from start to finish.What a great, great way to start your novel. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter after this review! Even ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Speechless

    Hello GriffinClaw! Wow, this was so good and I can't believe you ended it where it did-- effective in making me want more, but my jaw did hang open in ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Melting Diamonds

    Wow, Deanie! Wow. This was absolutely eye opening. You foreshadowed in the beginning, built up suspense in the middle, and then ended with a message you had so perfectly hinted ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Ambition

    I really enjoyed reading this poem! I loved the rhyme scheme and the way you built up to the conclusion. It was like a little story with the lesson of ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Day That It All Began

    Hey there and welcome to YWS! After reading this, I know why your friends liked this story; it was so well thought out and put together! You really have a ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Scared!

    I really enjoyed how you set this poem up. It's different and puts emphasis on the words that rhyme. The use of the language in here has made it a ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Death's Welcoming Arms

    Hey, Defying! I'm sorry I wasn't able to review sooner but I tried to get on as fast as I could. I'm sorry that you felt the way you described ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Montague's Last

    Let me start off by saying you have a real knack for writing! This story flowed and the action was vivid. And I absolutely loved that ending too! I was ...

    Nov 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: The Happy Home

    This an interesting story in the making for sure! The introduction couldn't have been more effective. You're writing flows wonderfully and it's easy to read and digest. Great job on ...

    Nov 26, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: A Fateful Find

    Hey Catbug! Let me start off by saying this story was wonderfully written. It honestly felt like something I would read out of a legit novel-- I can totally see ...

    Nov 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Description of a King

    This poem is adorable. For you to think so highly of your dog and make a well-written poem about him is what gives this a unique quality. I want to ...

    Nov 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Would you like to know how you died?

    I just love this story. The ending is beautifully sweet and sad, the idea wonderfully written. It was executed extremely well. The length of it was just enough to tell ...

    Nov 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Alpha-Bet

    Hey there, FireFox! You're doing such an amazing job reviewing that I thought you deserved another review on your story here. I'll try my best to give you some pointers ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Culture Re: I am here

    Hello, Sage! Wow, you have some amazing talent. Right off the bat the reader knows you know exactly what you're writing about because you write it with confidence. You really ...

    Nov 24, 2013


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