Keumgan

Hi there, Keumgan here for a review ! This is quite an amusing scene. Are you planning to make it into a novel? Overall I like the crispness of the ...

Hi there, Keumgan popping by for a review. I find this poem straight to the point, quite expressive, and despite being short, it's vivid with imagery. As someone who has ...

Hello! Keumgan here for a review! Overall I find your poem quite interesting. I love the use of tectonic plates, earthquakes, and other elements of nature, to describe the intense ...

Hi there ! Keumgan here popping by for a review. So the story is starting to develop quite nicely. I like the continued development of the characters, whereby we're beginning ...

This is a really touching piece. It actually made me remember instances when I observed a person I loved very much and noticed how they were dressed, how they walked, ...

Hello! Keumgan here for a review! First off, I like the playful tone you use from time to time. Your dialogue is pretty good in the sense that it already ...

Hi there! Keumgan here for a review. I think is a very interesting poem. I like how you started with what your mother didn't teach you, coaxing the reader to ...

I'm stunned. I have OCD, but not with numbers. I can't stop washing my hands and checking things like the oven is turned off several times, walking back home to ...

Hi there! Keumgan here for a review! Up. Parry. Block. There! I thrust as soon as I saw it, a slight opening. My awareness was rewarded when my wooden drill ...

I like this poem. When trying to understand it, I'm not sure if I got this right, but either you're talking to an old friend or deceased family member, or ...

Hi there, Keumgan here for a review! Is this going to be the beginning of your story? It sounds like it could be interesting. I get a feeling that you ...

Brilliant. You know what I love about your story? The fact that we are reading from the point of view of the villain. Even then we sometimes get a hint ...

Hello! Since you initially wanted to make a poem out of this, I couldn't help but trying to do that. I hope you don't mind. I really love your style. ...

Hi there ! I really love this prologue. It has a very poetic air to it, and your wording is powerful. You have a style that sets a certain solemn ...

Hi there ! I really like what you wrote there. Here's a quick review by paragraph. "As I pulled up to the large grey house, I glanced at the car’s ...