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Re: what is a woman?
Hello, the dead came back to the living. When I saw the title of this poe, I was slightly worried that it would become controversial like a specific documentary with ...
Apr 3, 2025 -
Re: ever since we founded rome
Hello, this is Kelisot for another review (because I need points to publish something). As of the first impression of the poem's title, the first thing that comes to mind ...
Oct 14, 2024 -
Re: Saints and Sinners
I love the paradoxical sentence in the first line of the poem. Saints and sinners are words with religious connotations that are the polar opposite, which I'm amazed how the ...
Mar 4, 2024 -
Re: The Betrayal of Rael
Hello. It's been a long time, but the person speaking is Kelisot here for another review. Looking at this narrative poetry, the first thing I noticed was that all stanzas ...
Oct 24, 2023 -
Re: Childhood Room
Hello, this is Kelisot for a review! I will say that you are writing some deep topics there, fellow friend. The first few lines stand out to me: We’ve been ...
May 12, 2023 -
Re: symbiosis
Hello. It's been a long time since I did a proper review, but I'm here tonight (at least, it's nighttime for me, what about you?) to make a review. As ...
Apr 16, 2023 -
Re: Haiku: Daring
Hello, this is Kelisot for a short review. I enjoyed reading the haiku, as they are one of my favorite types of poetry! Although people can interpret poetry freely and ...
Sep 15, 2022 -
Re: to be gay in this christian nation
DAMN THIS IS DEEP MAGE I FEEL YOU THERE, MY FRIEND Hello, this is Kelisot for a review, who is biased and can relate to you. I thought of writing ...
Aug 16, 2022 -
Re: Magpie
Hello, this is Kelisot here for a review. It caught my interest with your title being simply "Magpie", a favorite bird of mine because it sometimes reminds me of my ...
Aug 16, 2022 -
Re: The Sky-Whale
Your title reminds me of that one book about whales floating in the sky, I don't remember exactly the title was, but I found the surreal amazing awesome due to ...
Aug 8, 2022 -
Re: Abstract Love
Hello, this is Kelisot for a review. Your poem has an interesting structure of a stanza being a paragraph... Not sure if this is because you didn't know how to ...
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: Stories That Just Might Save Us
Hello, this is Kelisot writing... Something. I don't think it would be a review or a critique, because I honestly have no idea what I am writing right now. (That ...
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: Rivers Sleep In Winter
Hello, this is Kelisot. I am interested in this poem, because this poem takes time for me how I should interpret this as. Perhaps it's my lack of great English ...
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: Prince Charming
Hello, this is Kelisot with another poem. Alright, this poem was really an intriguing poem because of the coin duality (or expectation vs reality?) if the term prince charming. Iirc, ...
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: The Mind and the External World: an Oversimplified Peek into Locke’s Account
Oh, wow. I didn't actually expect an essay about John Locke and his proposal theorem about our sense and interaction of this external world. I honestly wouldn't say much of ...
Jul 24, 2022
