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Kelisot

Kelisot

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: what is a woman?

    Hello, the dead came back to the living. When I saw the title of this poe, I was slightly worried that it would become controversial like a specific documentary with ...

    Apr 3, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: ever since we founded rome

    Hello, this is Kelisot for another review (because I need points to publish something). As of the first impression of the poem's title, the first thing that comes to mind ...

    Oct 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Saints and Sinners

    I love the paradoxical sentence in the first line of the poem. Saints and sinners are words with religious connotations that are the polar opposite, which I'm amazed how the ...

    Mar 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Betrayal of Rael

    Hello. It's been a long time, but the person speaking is Kelisot here for another review. Looking at this narrative poetry, the first thing I noticed was that all stanzas ...

    Oct 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Childhood Room

    Hello, this is Kelisot for a review! I will say that you are writing some deep topics there, fellow friend. The first few lines stand out to me: We’ve been ...

    May 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: symbiosis

    Hello. It's been a long time since I did a proper review, but I'm here tonight (at least, it's nighttime for me, what about you?) to make a review. As ...

    Apr 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Haiku: Daring

    Hello, this is Kelisot for a short review. I enjoyed reading the haiku, as they are one of my favorite types of poetry! Although people can interpret poetry freely and ...

    Sep 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: to be gay in this christian nation

    DAMN THIS IS DEEP MAGE I FEEL YOU THERE, MY FRIEND Hello, this is Kelisot for a review, who is biased and can relate to you. I thought of writing ...

    Aug 16, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magpie

    Hello, this is Kelisot here for a review. It caught my interest with your title being simply "Magpie", a favorite bird of mine because it sometimes reminds me of my ...

    Aug 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Technology Re: The Sky-Whale

    Your title reminds me of that one book about whales floating in the sky, I don't remember exactly the title was, but I found the surreal amazing awesome due to ...

    Aug 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Abstract Love

    Hello, this is Kelisot for a review. Your poem has an interesting structure of a stanza being a paragraph... Not sure if this is because you didn't know how to ...

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: Stories That Just Might Save Us

    Hello, this is Kelisot writing... Something. I don't think it would be a review or a critique, because I honestly have no idea what I am writing right now. (That ...

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Rivers Sleep In Winter

    Hello, this is Kelisot. I am interested in this poem, because this poem takes time for me how I should interpret this as. Perhaps it's my lack of great English ...

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Prince Charming

    Hello, this is Kelisot with another poem. Alright, this poem was really an intriguing poem because of the coin duality (or expectation vs reality?) if the term prince charming. Iirc, ...

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Mind and the External World: an Oversimplified Peek into Locke’s Account

    Oh, wow. I didn't actually expect an essay about John Locke and his proposal theorem about our sense and interaction of this external world. I honestly wouldn't say much of ...

    Jul 24, 2022


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