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Re: Allegedly Intro
Hello Saruka, it's me outvaders. I was just looking for some short stories to review when I bumped into this one. It's pretty short as well- wait, this is FLASH ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: Deceiver
Hey, Mage. It's outvaders here. I was just looking for something to review, so I thought I'd review some friends' works. That's why I'm here. The story's pretty short to ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Our Secret Dance
What's this? A poetry review from outvaders? Whoaaaaaa! Hey, Light, it's ya boi outvaders here. Let's start with the hook. I feel like I have to criticize the word "review" ...
Apr 11, 2017 -
Re: Ookamizachi Gakuen
Hey Kaito, it's outvaders here to bring in a review for your piece. Before I get right into the beef, I'd like to say once again: welcome to YWS! I ...
Apr 10, 2017 -
Re: Dead Inside
Hey there, it's me outvaders. I'm just passing by to write up a short review for this equally short story. Before we get started though, welcome to YWS! It's a ...
Apr 8, 2017 -
Re: Untitled (Zombie Apocalypse Romance Short)
Hello Dracula, it's me, outvaders. Let's start with the review. When I read the title, I thought the premise of the story was pretty cool. I haven't seen anyone using ...
Apr 6, 2017 -
Re: Gamer Poem
Hello Ferruccio, it's outvaders here. This is a cute little poem. It's short, catchy and most of all, it talks about friendship. Or love. It's debatable, but it's more of ...
Apr 5, 2017 -
Re: Strabismus
Hey Light, it's ya boi awtbeyders. This is somewhat unusual, coming from you. You usually write in prose, so this is something fresh. Did you happen to be interested in ...
Mar 29, 2017 -
Re: Responsibilities of an 18 year old
Hello Khriziavee, I'm outvaders and I'm stopping by for a review this Review Day. It seems you're new to this place, so a belated welcome to YWS! It's a pleasure ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: If There's No End There Can Be No Beginning (Improved)
Hello there Raven, it's me outvaders. I'm just stopping by for a review this nice Review Day. Let's get right into the beef. Your story is a quite smooth reading ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: .
Hey ScytheMeister, it's outvaders here. I'm just here to review your good stuff this nice Review Day. I'm usually try not to review poetry, but there's barely anything reviewable in ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: My 2 Sentence Horror Stories
Ooh, flash fiction. Hello Kara, it's outvaders here. I'm here for a brief review this nice Review Day. Let's get right into the beef. Instead of getting straight to critiquing ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Art is Emotion
Hey there steam, it's me outvaders. I'm stopping by for a quick review on your work this Review Day. Let's get right into the beef. This one is a very ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Rachel and Matt VerIII
Hello there Ferruccio. It's me, outvaders, I'm here for to review your work this Review day. This short story was surprisingly smooth to read, but it didn't come with its ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: 11 Best Resources for Perfect Writing and Editing
Hello Jessica, I'm outvaders coming in for a review on Review Day. I can see that you're a bit new to this place, so heres's a belated welcome to YWS! ...
Mar 26, 2017
