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Re: soft light and big hearts//vignette. {edited}
Flash fiction and second-person? Hey come on man you don't copy other people's styles >:(( Hi manilla, here's the review I promised. This story is so interesting to me because ...
Jan 29, 2019 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 3: The Underground
Hi Mea. It's 48 minutes left before the end of Review Day and I'm like kinda rushing to get one in, but I'll do my best to maintain quality while ...
Jul 29, 2018 -
Re: A Letter from Girls
Okay, some background information about me so you can know about my attitude coming into this. I'm okay with the OG idea of feminism (gender equality), and I also think ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: Silver and Golden Eggs [3]
Cool moves, Light. Very rough, but I see an enjoyable fairy tale/fable-ish read underneath the words. I'll make a full-length review when more parts are out. I just end up ...
Jun 13, 2018 -
Re: Silver and Golden Eggs [2]
The interesting thing about reading a short story being published in parts is it's like seeing the development of a writer over a period of time. As in unlike the ...
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: Silver and Golden Eggs [1]
Okay, so here are some relevant facts about me so you can see where the opinions of this review come from. You might know some of these, but you can ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: Whats Beyond the Sea?
Here are some facts about me so hopefully you can see where the opinions of this review come from. I'm a millennial living in the PHL. I don't read YA ...
Jun 4, 2018 -
Re: An Old Photo and A Thief
Okay, I'll tell a bit of myself so you can understand where the opinions of this review come from. I'm a millennial. I live in the PHL. I wrote flash ...
Jun 4, 2018 -
Re: Weeb
Konnichiwa Peiji! autobeidaasu desu for a review on this poem! Jitsu wa, I liked this poem a lot because I'm so into anime these days, and my friends and I ...
Apr 5, 2018 -
Re: Get Away
Hi Querencia. This is the long overdue review of your first SAW story. But you know, better late than never. I'll do my best to achieve the usual detailed long-form ...
Mar 22, 2018 -
Re: Forgettable Me
I kind of have an unfair advantage because I know the context of this poem better than everyone else, but whatever. I'll skip the basics about this being an alright ...
Feb 9, 2018 -
Re: Arrow Under the Moonlight
Hey, Light. I try to keep my promises, even though they come in months later lol. Let's proceed with the notes I got. -I noticed from the beginning that the ...
Aug 20, 2017 -
Re: The Cursed Maiden
Hey Mage, it's that guy outvaders again. I saw some short stories around, which is nice to review. Let's get right into the news. Hoo, this story got four stars ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: The Princess with a Third Eye
Hey FioFaire, it's outvaders here. I'm just passing by to pull you out of the Green Room. The story's pretty short, so why the hell not? Before anything else though, ...
Jun 12, 2017 -
Re: Arcadia Airways
Writing about a flight while being in a flight yourself. That's meta af mang. Hi marms, it's me outvaders. I bumped into this work of yours as I was looking ...
Jun 8, 2017
