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Awww you guys that was so cute!! I loved it so much! You captured the beauty of twin-ness very well ;) My favorite part is... And I have to admit, ...

I know what it feels like to admire from a makes life feel like it is walking away from you every time he does not look your way or when ...

I liked this poem. It was creative and I could relate to what was being said. Even though this poem was about lies, there was a lot of truth behind ...

I think I say this every time, but...I loved it! You have a great sense of rythem and flow. I also really liked the ending when there was a little ...

Very nice. I loved the parallel throughout the whole story. It really kept my attention! I also noticed the grammer edit of changing "his" to "hit" but that was already ...

Hey! I really liked this! It was amazing :) I liked your word choice, In the shadows of your mind, In the dungeons of your soul, Those were two of ...

This piece of poetry is really good. I like the way it flows and I like the imagery. I did find one edit the last stanza the 'i' should be ...

Even though this was a sad poem it made me smile. It fit my taste for poetry. I apologize I have nothing to suggest to improve this poem, because I ...

This poem made me laugh because a few days ago, for Valentine's Day, I was trying to rhyme a word with purple and had no luck. I have reciently found ...

Hello. This piece is really good, but I just have one suggestion. Instead of using contractions I would write the word out. It gives the poem more of a flow, ...

I liked reading this story. It kept my interest the whole time, but I also agree that you should tell more about why this couple was fighting in the first ...

WOW. As I was reading your story I fell in love with it! It was really easy to connect to and includes many common emotions teenagers feel. I especially liked ...