KatherineF92

hey there, so what you're saying with this is very interesting; the title itself is enough to make you stop and think. but while you excel in originality you lack ...

well i think everyone else pretty much covered it, but i just wanted to say good job! it was easy to read, and not as dull as you thought it ...

hey there! so i thought this poem was really nice, the rhythm was really fluent and it just felt good to read, haha. that sounds weird but when i'm reading ...

i'm guessing you really like marmalade? haha personally i can't stand the stuff, but if you're willing to write about it, i'm willing to read about it. so at first ...

hey there dreamwriter, i liked your poem. it was quite relatable. and i didn't find it akward at all, you should have more confidence in your work. though the second ...

your style of writing if definatley appealing. it's not difficult, nor is it bland or immature. the story is interesting, after a few paragraphs i forgot i was supposed to ...

ok, don't hate me. i found your poem a tad creepy. like.. i understand that your describing sex (are we allowed to say that word? oh well) in such a ...

hmm. i like it. but i don't understand it, not really. maybe it's just my comprehension skills (or lack thereof), but i can't figure out what it's telling me, other ...

you lost me after her bf broke up with her. was her bf cody? and if so, why did he break up with her and then chase her home? and ...

wisemann210 wrote: I need one, One true love To guide my way My way through love. A love so great It confuses the heart. A heart that loves Is a ...

Simply wonderful. I know your looking for critique, but I really have nothing to offer (and I'm usually an over-critical sort of person). This just flowed so nicely, I forgot ...

this is cute. how old is frank? im guessing anywhere from 16-18, but i get the feeling he's one of those late bloomers, you know, a really sheltered child. that's ...

this was so good. seriously, i was completley absorbed the whole time. the only thing i'd say was missing was exactly why caitlyn died. i'd really like to know. and ...

hey there. that was pretty interesting. I liked how the protagonist is so acidic to people. It gives her personality some flavor. I would like to know what she looks ...

This was very interesting to read. And very difficult, I might add. The first time I read it, I was extremley confused, but maybe that's just my smallish brain kicking ...