KatGirl

Thank you so much for this long review-this helped a lot! By the way, on the 'bad dragon' part with the old woman, it was actually the old woman saying ...

Not that much, no. The speech part is alike to the Hunger Games one, but I don't suggest changing it.

Lol! How funny! I was about to say 'This is exactly the mix of the Hunger Games and the Maze Runner!' And of course, there is your Author's note. This ...

Oops... sorry I submitted my review twice D: Your welcome :)

Oh wait.. is it supposed to be like that? I just caught the same word in your story but I think I was the one who spelled it wrong o-o

Your welcome! {Even though I didn't do anything} xD

I don't have any nitpicks-I guess all I really can say is W.O.W!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your welcome!

Oh ok, I guess I missed that part :)

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Hello! The ending was quite a cliff-hanger. I'm sorry I haven't read your previous chapters, but I could get a basic understanding by reading this one. "But, shouldn't it of ...

Nevermind this comment xD

Comment: NO WAY! O: A character in my book is named Jay.

I might add it in into what I'm already writing or making something completely new out of it.

*gasp IS SPEECHLESS O:

Thank you! These nitpicks helped me a lot.