KatGirl

Basically I am here for mainly praise, since I really can't find anything wrong with your piece, that's why people usually don't comment if they can't find anything wrong with ...

I typically don't read hippie love pieces, but I'll do it, since it's review day. By the way- is Tachycardia a place? I found myself debutante in the messy passenger ...

This text was very hard to see, so I literally had to post it on here. I don't understand why you start it out with one word and than the ...

WELL WHAT I THINK HAPPENED WAS THAT BOB ATE HIMSELF AND THEN HE INFECTED JOE AND THAN THEY ALL WENT CRAZY AND KILLED EACH OTHER BUT THE INFECTION GOT ON ...

I like how you describe scenes in the story and actions played out. However, I know that I will have to face both Charles and Eddie again at some point. ...

Once upon a time[,] [there] was a little city called Rose Town[.] He did not feel his departure to the sky. Nor did he feel his brutal descent back to ...

I couldn't really feel the meaning in this except for the "monster" was a person and that he was fine with this girl's personalities; like how easily frightened she can ...

OMG. The description of all of this was amazing, truly amazing! I loved the word choice you used in it. Write more!!! *will follow after done reviewing this poem. Just ...

Once again, just a couple grammar mistakes, nothing bad. I really liked the 3rd line, I have no idea why.. lol The pitiful excuse of the naked mole rat, What ...

Hello! I enjoy the rhythm of the poem, but I found some grammar mistakes. It had real depth and emotion in it even though it was short. Keep your wolf ...

Hello, I'll be correcting your entire piece so that you can copy and paste the correct form. I enjoy the plot, but if people are really going to enjoy this ...

Hello! I like the theme of your story, all it needs is a little improvement, the cliff-hanger at the end is always good lol He leaped at her[,] but she ...

To be honest, I felt like there wasn't much feeling to me anyway, it didn't make me feel anything at all. To me, it seemed like you were just stating ...

Woah.. lots of grammar mistakes.. I've seen that you have been putting sentences with no capitalization, I've also seen you not even putting commas where they are supposed to be ...

Hello! I'm going to copy and paste your work, adding in the things that need to be added in. I found this to have potential, but your grammar, I must ...