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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sunday morning mind

    Thanks for the review. The formatting is exactly how it's meant to be. Also, if I was going to tell you exactly what I was thinking I would have written ...

    Fri Jan 01, 2016 4:19 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sunday morning mind

    Thanks for the review. I disagree though, I don't think the first line needs a full stop. The sentence runs on to the next line; "Rush of consciousness confounds throb ...

    Fri Jan 01, 2016 12:26 pm
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Built like a sea

    Note: This review has been deleted

    Sat Jan 03, 2015 11:13 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mourning after

    Just looking through my old reviews, noticed I forgot to reply. The font choice was unintentional, that's just what happens when I copy and paste from MS Word. The seasons ...

    Wed Oct 01, 2014 6:48 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 5 minutes outside

    Thanks.

    Fri Jun 13, 2014 10:26 am
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    You should have a more careful read of that wiki. Here we can see both Pocahontas and Mulan listed as "official princesses" And here we can see Eilonwy listed as ...

    Mon Mar 17, 2014 6:20 pm
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    You're forgetting Eilonwy from the Black Cauldron, and Pocahontas is totally a princess, her father is the chief.

    Mon Mar 17, 2014 4:20 pm
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Why I believe in God.

    Reviews are supposed to be critical, not an ego-massaging session.

    Tue Jan 28, 2014 4:05 pm
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Why I believe in God.

    No Rob, I don't care about the intent of the poem, people can write poetry about whatever they like. I just think it's technically bad. It's not even a poem, ...

    Tue Jan 28, 2014 5:30 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: House of the rising sun chapter 1

    You know House of the Rising Sun is a song about a brothel in New Orleans, right?

    Sun Dec 29, 2013 6:13 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Haruspex of regret

    It's a plot device. Something that motivates the character but has not much actual bearing on the plot. Sometimes it's money, or power, or survival, or something corporeal like the ...

    Sat Dec 07, 2013 5:56 am
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Haruspex of regret

    The stealer is a macguffin. They're not important.

    Sat Dec 07, 2013 5:49 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a senryu of sorts

    Senryu, not haiku.

    Sun Nov 10, 2013 7:24 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stay golden

    It's actually "Stay gold, Ponyboy."

    Tue Nov 05, 2013 6:03 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Unremembering

    You're on the level.

    Tue Jun 25, 2013 5:38 am


It's all a matter of perspective. Everyone is the hero of their own story, and the villain of another's.
— James