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Karzkin

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sunday morning mind

    Thanks for the review. The formatting is exactly how it's meant to be. Also, if I was going to tell you exactly what I was thinking I would have written ...

    Jan 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sunday morning mind

    Thanks for the review. I disagree though, I don't think the first line needs a full stop. The sentence runs on to the next line; "Rush of consciousness confounds throb ...

    Jan 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Built like a sea

    Note: This review has been deleted

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mourning after

    Just looking through my old reviews, noticed I forgot to reply. The font choice was unintentional, that's just what happens when I copy and paste from MS Word. The seasons ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 5 minutes outside

    Thanks.

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    You should have a more careful read of that wiki. Here we can see both Pocahontas and Mulan listed as "official princesses" And here we can see Eilonwy listed as ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    You're forgetting Eilonwy from the Black Cauldron, and Pocahontas is totally a princess, her father is the chief.

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Why I believe in God.

    Reviews are supposed to be critical, not an ego-massaging session.

    Jan 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Why I believe in God.

    No Rob, I don't care about the intent of the poem, people can write poetry about whatever they like. I just think it's technically bad. It's not even a poem, ...

    Jan 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: House of the rising sun chapter 1

    You know House of the Rising Sun is a song about a brothel in New Orleans, right?

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Haruspex of regret

    It's a plot device. Something that motivates the character but has not much actual bearing on the plot. Sometimes it's money, or power, or survival, or something corporeal like the ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Haruspex of regret

    The stealer is a macguffin. They're not important.

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a senryu of sorts

    Senryu, not haiku.

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stay golden

    It's actually "Stay gold, Ponyboy."

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Unremembering

    You're on the level.

    Jun 25, 2013


The only person I know for certain I am better than is the person I used to be.
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