Karzkin

I'm here, as promised. I'm conflicted about this one. The first stanza starts well, introducing the motifs of rain, the dress, and the flowers. I especially like the fifth line, ...

Sadbox, I'm here. I would have to disagree with Mesh, I think it all connects beautifully. She calls it tenuous, I would call it subtle. Especially the link of 'fingerpaint', ...

Congratulations, this is my first review in... ages. And it goes to you! This one is a bit hit-and-miss. First the hits. Your images are clear, and sustained. Eyelashes, spiders, ...

Mr. K here. Shall we? You can feel it, can't you? ... You can feel it. Can’t you? Cute, but unnecessary. Save rhetorical questions for rhetoric. And only then if ...

Audy, returning the favour. First, props for the consistently effective alliteration. Very nice. To what extent was it deliberate? Second, what's going on with the meter? You have a very ...

Hahaha. Somehow I feel like the 'spoiler' was aimed straight at me. It could be a haiku, all it needs is a keriji (I'll leave it to you to figure ...

Hello. Review time. I must say I did not like this poem. In fact, I might question whether this could even be called a poem. There are two things that ...

Lumilicious, I dig it. Sort of. I really like the oh-so-subtle reference to Miles' All Blues . 6/8, blues, even the sirens motif. Cool. I think, however, that Snoink hit ...

Hello there. Review time. But first, let me congratulate you on submitting. Now, to business. First, the good. This piece has a clear direction. You know what you want to ...

Hello. I don't think we've met before. I'm here for a review. Let's get cracking. First, I would like to comment on what Fizz said. I respectfully disagree with her ...

Hello Rose. I do not believe we have met before. I am here at the behest of another, but I'm happy to review your work nonetheless. First, allow me to ...

Hello! As promised, review coming your way. First, congratulations on another submission. It's good to see you producing regularly. Now, the poems. We've spoken already briefly about the first one. ...

Hello PollarBear! Around here I am a bit of a (self-appointed) haiku guru, so allow me to have a look at yours. First, if you haven't already, may I humbly ...

Oh Em, this is great :D I seem to recall you mentioning your fear of snails to me once, ages ago. While I can appreciate that this piece doesn't capture ...

Right, you asked for it :P June and Madi have both mentioned the emotional aspect, so I shan't. Enough has been said on that score. Instead, I shall address some ...