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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing
Hello, BlueAfrica. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I kept seeing chapters of this novel everyday so I figured I’d give it a ...
Apr 4, 2018 -
Re: Conquer
Hello, Winged067. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? OVERALL OPINION Since you are trying to add this to a novel, I am just ...
Apr 4, 2018 -
Re: Raging Storm
Hello, Katnes. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I saw in your author’s note that you mentioned that there will be grammar issues, ...
Apr 3, 2018 -
Re: Fairystruck [1]
Hello, Lareine. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. CHARACTERS I love Mal. He is determined to solve the case, and I love ...
Apr 3, 2018 -
Re: there are things sadder than you and i. some people do not even touch.
Hello, Nobunaga. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. CLARITY & MESSAGE I don’t quite understand the clarity here, but I think that ...
Apr 3, 2018 -
Re: Our Secret Dance [2]
Hello, Lightsong. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? OVERALL OPINION I already read the first part of your story, so I already know ...
Mar 31, 2018 -
Re: You Always did the Opposite
Hello, Radrook. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. CLARITY & MESSAGE From what I understood, it seems like the speaker is saying ...
Mar 31, 2018 -
Re: Psychic chapter six
Hello, AnimalQueen. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. PLOT As for the plot so far in the story, Charlotte is able to ...
Mar 31, 2018 -
Re: A Merry Band of Monsters - Chapter 4
Hello, Thundahguy. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? ( I have returned. I love this novel, lel. ) I. PLOT Okay, I am ...
Mar 30, 2018 -
Re: Epitaph
Hello, AngelColline. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. CLARITY & MESSAGE The message the speaker was trying to express seemed very sad, ...
Mar 29, 2018 -
Re: Twenty Crimes and Couting
Hello, molly16. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. PLOT Alright. From what I read, it seems like her past with her father ...
Mar 29, 2018 -
Re: hand in the wolf's mouth
Hello, corvidconvalescence. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. CLARITY & MESSAGE I understood the message the speaker is trying to portray. Basically, ...
Mar 29, 2018 -
Re: The Free Socialist Manifesto - The Power of Education and its Shortcomings
Hello, LeutnantSchweinehund. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. AGREE OR DISAGREE? Okay, I read over your article twice so I can have ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: Since Infinity Chapter 10
Hello, Daenyss. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Note: This review will be based off this chapter alone since I have not read ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: Quiet
Hello, FamelicosFudgel. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. CLARITY & MESSAGE Since this is from personal experience, I will just be stating ...
Mar 28, 2018