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  • Other » Other, General
    Re: Live Your Life (Reviews Needed)

    Hello, WanderlustStardust. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? OVERALL OPINION: I enjoyed the topic itself and the lesson that is being portrayed. You ...

    May 31, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: Summoning Persephone part 2

    Hello, Dreamworx95. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Chapter: Now we get to why she had that name Callista. I was ...

    May 3, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
    Re: Summoning Persephone (750 words)

    Hello, Dreamworx95. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Note: I told you I will be going back to the beginning. Now I will ...

    May 3, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Summoning Persephone part 17

    Hello, Dreamworx95. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Chapter: Even though this story is not meant to be a romance novel, ...

    May 3, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    Re: theRecording02 : I met her, sort of

    Hello, NoName. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Story thus Far: Alright, now we know what the main character’s name is: ...

    May 3, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
    Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 1

    Hello, TheMulticoloredCyr. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Story thus Far: I enjoyed the way you portrayed Zitta. Is she some ...

    May 3, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: Blood On Snow (Chapter 1)

    Hello, LivitheWriter4. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Story thus Far: I must say, it went from elegant to climatic real ...

    May 3, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction
    Re: The Depths Chapter 1

    Hello, ARandomVoltronFan. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Story thus Far: Okay, I do not know much of Voltron, but I ...

    May 3, 2018

  • Poetry » Humor, Other
    Re: Rump para Lump: Nonsense Verse

    Hello, Radrook. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? So I don't how to review this since, like you said, it's nonsense literature. I ...

    May 2, 2018

  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Flower

    Hello, Blueflood. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I must say, when you labeled this as a short story, it is a short ...

    May 2, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    Re: The Recording01.mkv

    Hello, NoName. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Story thus far: As your first work on the site, I have to ...

    May 2, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture
    Re: It hurts.

    Hello, Spilledink. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Note: I can’t tell if this happened to you in real life, or you understand ...

    May 2, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    Re: A Rare Normal Chapter One

    Hello, killeham. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Story thus Far: The way of your words flow in this chapter. I ...

    May 2, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: Creature Of Guilt, And Dust Chapter Two...

    Hello, ThatGeekyGirl. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Note: Make sure you let your readers know that this is a fanfiction since this ...

    May 2, 2018

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural
    Re: The Zombie Game [part 1]

    Hello, TheBlueCat. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Impression on Story thus Far: I enjoyed the gamer streak Ruby has inside her. I ...

    May 1, 2018


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