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Re: LAPIS :Chapter 3:
Hello. Remember when I promised I'd review every chapter? It's taken a while, but I'm back! The only major issue with this chapter, which has already been pointed out by ...
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: Tittie Traitor
This is incredible and made me laugh so hard , partly because I was not expecting the poem to have this particular subject, but also because that repetition just made ...
Jun 15, 2014 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 13:
*staggers in from a place called Real Life* *brushes off the dust of work and sets to work on a long-delayed review* Sorry about how long it took me to ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: Omega
Hello. Here I am to give you a review~ Hi, my name is Poppy Victoria Anna Maria Newman. This is a terrible first line because, not only is it a ...
Apr 7, 2014 -
Re: Childhood Is Dead
Hello, dragonofphoenix. I don't think we've had a chance to chat before, though I hope we do get a chance after this. With that said, I'm going to tackle the ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Nichole Olafson Attended The highly prestigious, Madison Area Memorial High School
Hello Ms. Olafson (at least, I presume, from your username, olafson11, that you are, indeed, Ms. Olafson herself). Welcome to the Young Writers Society. I hope you enjoy your stay. ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Black Eyes: Chapter 5: The Foolish Kings
Hello! It's me again, here to review another chapter. Pretty much everything I mentioned in my review of the previous chapter applies to this chapter as well, especially the bits ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Cry Wolf: Chapter 2
Hello there, anabelsinclair. I, a bold Knight of the Green Room , am here to review you on this fine Review Day. I hope you don't mind. I should also ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Unsilenced War: Chapter 3
Hello there, Soulkana. I, a bold Knight of the Green Room , am here to review you on this fine Review Day. I hope you don't mind. I should also ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Black Eyes Chapter 4: The Earthshifter
Hello there, AdjiFlex. I, a bold Knight of the Green Room , am here to review you on this fine Review Day. I hope you don't mind. I should also ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Chapter 5 Part 2
Hello there, thegirlwhowrites. I, a bold Knight of the Green Room , am here to review you on this fine Review Day. I hope you don't mind. I should also ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 4) Part 1: King Over the Wasteland
Hello there, Wriskypump. I, a bold Knight of the Green Room , am here to review you on this fine Review Day. I hope you don't mind. I think I ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 8 part 2: Cynthia, Ghost Town
Hello there, rainbowcabbit. I, a bold Knight of the Green Room , am here to review you on this fine Review Day. I hope you don't mind. I should also ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: House of Whispers: Chapter 6 - Of Forest and Memory
Hello again! I'm back for more this fine Review Day. *gives the chapters love because no one else is* Like Vivian already mentioned, that was a lovely creepy ending. I'd ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Chapter 4
Hello there, kman134. I, a bold Knight of the Green Room , am here to review you on this fine Review Day. I hope you don't mind. I should also ...
Mar 30, 2014