KailaMarie

Ok, sorry that took so long to get to. Here's the review you asked for! Since this is poetry, you don't have to have grammar any way at all, but ...

Hi, sorry for taking so long for your review, but here I am! “About Jeni’s boy? Yes. It’s absolutely awful he was kidnapped.” I glanced towards the forest on the ...

Sorry this took me a while to get to, but here's your review! This was really great. As the people above me have said, you have a magnificent way with ...

I didn't read the whole thing, but I don't like this very much, to be honest. I mean, I get that it's a spoof, but I expected it to be ...

I actually liked how there wasn't any quotation marks. At first I was a little confused, and I'm not sure if I would want to read an entire book that ...

I absolutely love the beginning two paragraphs!! adopting the disappointed feeling one gets when one is let down, This seems a bit redundant to me. People usually are disappointed when ...

First Story: I liked it a lot. I liked how rushed it was. I would almost like to get attached to the characters more, though. I would have liked to ...

This made me go "AWWWW!" Hahaha. This is beautiful. I felt like this line doesn't fit, though: And I swear that I will find you I'm just wondering why she ...

I'm back again! Ilani was nothing more than a coward, a poor commander, a failuer. It's spelt "failure" For a person who didn't know Aram, which was quite rare inside ...

Here I am again. Haha. Ok, here we go. Aram said, keeping his hand on his chest; it always paid to show respect to your superiors, was one of Aram's ...

Hi, I'm finally here to review. So sorry it took so long! This was really good. I didn't find much wrong with it, and it sets up the scene for ...

I liked this, but I feel like you could expand on it to make it a little better. Like you could talk more about the first time, like how you ...

I absolutely loved this. It was creepy but really well written! Great job. I don't have anything you should improve on except in the beginning all the "he" and "him" ...

Sorry this took so long to get to, I've been sick. So let's get started! Nitpicks: “Or is it the smartest,” he countered The comma should be a question mark ...

Sorry this took so long, I've been really busy, but I finally found some time. (: I really like the opening line. It makes me curious and want to keep ...