Kaida_Wynd

Interesting. I got some random thoughts flittering in my mind in the middle of that. It's intriguing to me, thought I can't say particularly why. However, I did enjoy this ...

Glad you liked it.

What are the worm like things? The only other gripe I have is that the last line doesn't make any sense... The first ones were fingers, the second ones were ...

Sure no problem

Nifty way to put those words together. I showed it to my sister and she liked it too(she's a dancer). Interesting, plain and simple.

Very creative, even though I really had no idea who those angry people were or even what was going on after when someone called Felicity was mentioned. Things just got ...

you make me laugh Saint. I did like it, though. :D

thanks I will work on it asap!

Hmm. I liked this, it has character(in my opinion people!) There are a few parts where it dragged slightly, but not enough to make me tell you change it.

I have updated it as far as I possibly can right now with my computer on the fritz. If you like it right now, there is a lot more coming, ...

W.O.W that was an intense poem. I thought it wasn't going to be as good as it was. I mean, rape is terrible, but described in such a way, it ...

Emily didn't read the rules! *pokes you with a fork* You've got to critique at least two things before posting your own work. ¿Comprende? *goes to hunt for the link ...

I liked this very much, but i do not like the use of "Rosie" repeatedly in the beginning few paragraphs. The plot was original, but not bad in the way ...

Interesting. I think that all in all it was excellently written. In the ending, the "I know." I wonder if it could be written as "It is understood." Separation and ...