Note: This has lyrics in it, yeah I know, but it is still my own work, as there are several spots which are not from songs(or if they are, it is pure coincidence that I used them). There were too many artists to list, but if you search each line, then you'll find what song they were from.
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Staring down the barrel of a 45,
Enveloped by fear in which he could not hide.
With hands held high into a sky so blue,
Life slowly began to fade in your eyes.
As the ocean opens up to swallow you
I take 3 L's to the head,
you think to yourself,
Love, Live, Life, then I'm dead.
"Why does my heart cry?"
You shout aloud to the night.
An explosion of catastrophe
ripping through the air.
"Can you feel her burning through you veins?"
A voice unknown calls out.
"She will always live forever."
The man tries to answer as loud as he could.
"I see the angels, I'll lead them to your door."
There's no escape now, no mercy no more.
"No remorse 'cause I still remember,
"The smile when you tore me apart."
His body slumped to the ground.
The man went to the heavens and was no more.
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Awsome use of song lyrics!! I found Linkin Park's "Hands Held High" just reading through it. (i love that song) I bet there are more lyrics from songs I know in there though. I'll have to look it up.