Young Writers Society

Greetings! I have to say I wasn't expecting this kind of intensity, but wow does it drive the point home! I don't think I need to go on about how ...

Greetings, Mercedes! As promised, I have returned, though it took me a bit to remember all that had happened. ;) So, the first thing I want to comment on is ...

Aw, this was a cute little piece here. There was also so much truth in it! I loved how you started with the image of people having phantom feet that ...

Nicely written here. I'm checking out your poems so I can do that poll for you. :) I love your sort of condescending tone here. It really gives the first ...

Hm...Well, this isn't quite as nearly ironed out as your newer poems. However, after a deeper look into it, I find myself liking it. :) The beginning two stanzas nicely ...

Hm. This chapter was a bit short. Well, it still deserves a review. :) So, I like that you didn't suddenly forget about Cyprus's injury. That was really good that ...

I returned...late, but better than not at all... Again, I love your vivid descriptions. One of them was missing a nail, leaving a small black hole gazing back at him. ...

This was an amazing piece right here. Unlike some of the other poetry on here, you took a more traditional approach and we're very careful to gst the rhymes right. ...

Aw!! This was so sweet. Actually, this brought back memories Id kid of forgotten of back when I used to bake with mud, too. This was such a heartfelt piece. ...

Hello! I'm here to leave a review. :) I really enjoyed reading this piece. Your descriptive details are spot on from this part- The ceiling fan spun slowly and steadily. ...

So, ahem! I believe this is a little part of something else, possibly? Well, either way, I'm here to give you a review. So, despite the little snippet you shared ...

So first of all, nicely done with the rhyme scheme here. Whenever I try to make things rhyme, it doesn't usually work out all that great, but you nailed that ...

Hello, Alpaca!! Saw this sitting all lonely in the Green Room and thought it was time I did another review after getting all lazy during my vacation. All right, let's ...

Hello! I'm currently on vacation which is why it's been a bit since I've reviewed. I actually read this a while ago, but didn't have the chance to review until ...

Hello, foxmaster! I'm here to leave a review here. I have to say I was a little disappointed to find that this was so short. I was just getting interested, ...