Kaia

I have returned. :D Hmmmmmm...So, I got a little confused with what was happening in the beginning because you had so many characters. I think I finally have Victor and ...

Augh, the leaders back, but so am I, lol! Howdy, Mercedes! I'm back for another review! So I have to say that I got really excited when I heard that ...

Heya, Mercedes! I'm on mobile so expect crazy typos and no apostrophes, lol. I really liked how you had Yagi making origami. This little detail says a lot. First, he ...

Heya, Mercedes! I have returned! “Leave?” Sako asked. He coughed hard and cleared his throat, “But we can’t leave.” Okay, that beginning had me hooked right away. The time skip ...

Hello! I'm here to leave you a review. :) I had to read this twice to try to get the full meaning of this, because this was short, but quite ...

Hello, Shia! I'm here for a quick review. Please keep in mind that I have not read Chapter 1, so my review might be a little crazy. ;) I first ...

Greetings! I have to say I wasn't expecting this kind of intensity, but wow does it drive the point home! I don't think I need to go on about how ...

Greetings, Mercedes! As promised, I have returned, though it took me a bit to remember all that had happened. ;) So, the first thing I want to comment on is ...

Aw, this was a cute little piece here. There was also so much truth in it! I loved how you started with the image of people having phantom feet that ...

Nicely written here. I'm checking out your poems so I can do that poll for you. :) I love your sort of condescending tone here. It really gives the first ...

Hm...Well, this isn't quite as nearly ironed out as your newer poems. However, after a deeper look into it, I find myself liking it. :) The beginning two stanzas nicely ...

Hm. This chapter was a bit short. Well, it still deserves a review. :) So, I like that you didn't suddenly forget about Cyprus's injury. That was really good that ...

I returned...late, but better than not at all... Again, I love your vivid descriptions. One of them was missing a nail, leaving a small black hole gazing back at him. ...

This was an amazing piece right here. Unlike some of the other poetry on here, you took a more traditional approach and we're very careful to gst the rhymes right. ...

Aw!! This was so sweet. Actually, this brought back memories Id kid of forgotten of back when I used to bake with mud, too. This was such a heartfelt piece. ...