KaiTheGreater

I think 'utter' should be 'utterly', but maybe not.... Also, there's a random indent on that line. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but it just seemed ...

That word 'silence' doesn't really seem appropriate there.... But other than that I love it!! :)

You just about wrote my soul. Wonderful poem! :D

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I loved this poem, but I do have one quick suggestion. It might make the poem a little more... something... if you refer to the Night and Sleep as people ...

I loved this poem, but I do have one quick suggestion. It might make the poem a little more... something... if you refer to the Night and Sleep as people ...

I don't really think the narrator is supporting LGTBQIA so much as just saying that just because they don't, that doesn't mean they hate those people. I'm glad someone has ...

Thanks for reviewing! About that middle stanza, what I meant to say is that I know I'm searching for something but I've forgotten what it is. I just know it's ...

Thanks for reviewing. :) I will definitely consider your suggestions!

Thanks for the feedback! :) I'm glad you like it!

Those three lines... basically narrate the story of my life. Wow.

That could totally be turned into a poem....

Well, I looked for a "Love" button, but couldn't find one... So I clicked the "Like" button instead. :) Please keep it up!!

Thank you!! :D

Thanks for reviewing! This was originally part of a novel, so that's why it might have been a little confusing with first/second person.

You are just too amazing for me to give a proper review. No fair, I want points! :D