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Re: Silly Me
Sol.. Another excellent piece of work! This one is rather light hearted and fun, a real easy going read. I thoroughly enjoyed every verse and not only did it show ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Something in my closet
This was extremely well written and original. I really enjoyed reading your work, it was funny and obviously you took time and effort to post this. Well done on being ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Take A Walk With Me, Dad.
Someone has talent! I love this site cause all the ideas are so original and this is my favourite poem apart from a good few of silentrain's work. I found ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Wishes Enveloped In Paper Aeroplanes
I feel the worst ever. I cannot beleive I forgot to review for you! I honestly thought I had. I'm really nervous now 'cause I'm like~This has to be good! ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: You are science.
I was confused when I read this~i like cocked my head to the side and tried to figure out what 'you' was. I'm still not sure. I kind of think ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Ephemeral Girl
Okay well I'm here on request! When I read the title I felt excited as it's quite a universal title as it could mean so many things. I have to ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: You Have Your God
I think I'm quite attached to this poem. There's something about it that makes me want to cry and hate at the same time, really weird mixture of emotions. I ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Argument of the Fried Brains
This is quite genius! I couldn't have though of better myself! Well done chap! Haha, I really seriously liked this, it was funny and made me sit back and have ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 6
Alot of people like this and I do too... its really good and thoroughly enjoyed. I'm not bothered to add anything more length-y (Sorry :) but you already have so ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)
Ohh this is getting interesting. I'm like all pysched for the next chapter now. You'll have to write fast skinsy! xD Ok so here I go with the nitty-gritty stuff.. ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: I Miss You
This was good and really heartfelt. I was so moved by every verse, it's no the most skilful thing I've seen you write but it's touching, which is what makes ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: DELETED!
Hey Shubi! Here on request! xD The was a quite a few grammar errors but none too major. So here I go, pointing out YOUR typo's istead of you pointing ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Hate or Love? *edited*
I actually really like this I mean I totally know what you mean with this. I want more passion in the kiss more meaning. Make us feel like he's kissing ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: The loss of a loved one
Liquid. This is beautiful. No wonder its close to your heart. If I'm honest it wasn't amazingly skillfull but it was seriously moving, breathtaking. I couldn't find anything wrong with ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: One thing
Hmm.. this is quite good for a newbie! (I mean that in a good way xD) I was actually quite surprised by how good this was. Really descriptive. I wrote ...
Jan 5, 2011
