Kaedee

Hi! KD here for a non-nitpick review! Hehe. This chapter lacks feeling the most out of everything. Feelings, and thoughts. What's going through the MC's head when her parents say ...

Hiya inkmind. Welcome to the site! I'm KD, and I'll be reviewing your work today. I'll try not to repeat anything ace said, haha! First, watch your tenses, and ellipses! ...

Hey, Shep. I really liked this. It was so sad, sweet, and touching. Great imagery; the beginning made me smile. I love how you were able to show so much ...

Hi Embee, KD here to review again. “Skinwalkers aren’t born, they’re made. Please, Papa, you have to find the cure for us,” she pleaded. Instead of asking her father to ...

Hey! Wow, I quite like this. I love how...mysterious Ashley is. You did a great job with the characters, and the imagery of this piece. Overall this was very well ...

Yo, tigs. KD here to review! Let's start off first with formatting; I'll try not to repeat anything that anyone else said. I think this would be much nicer if ...

Drawers! I'm KD, here to review your piece today. Continue! Please continue...if you have an idea! I mean, I shouldn't actually be the judge of whether to continue or not ...

Hey ace! It's me, here to try to review your poem! ^^ I loved the nice flow to this poem. Turn on the lights in the lonely towns, Arouse the ...

Yo, Zoray. (: Kaedee is here to review! Let me guess what you were trying to show the reader through this piece: Alexa is a girl who is bright and ...

Hi hugs. Welcome to YWS! jayleigh said, hardly anybody would want to read this/even try to read this. Break this whole thing into paragraphs...maybe even separate this into parts, since ...

Hey jasmine. I loved this! I think this idea has tons of promise; I think I've imagined something like this before in a dream or something. It was pretty scary... ...

Hey KitxKat, I'll try to review this since this has no reviews yet! One thing I cannot really critique you on is the format; I simply do not know how ...

Hi, possible. You did a fairly good job on describing the man's face. I sat here, frozen, eyes glued on my screen for this whole part. Hm, maybe I would ...

Hiya, austenite! KD here to review. Overall, this was very nice. I especially like the dancer's personality/character, and her reactions to 'Lacrosse Boy'. I also actually found the short paragraph(s)

Hey bubblegum! I'm KD, and today I'll try my best to give you a quick review on your script! Okay. I thought this was cute. But, this being a script, ...