KaatiieBugg

hey, thanks for reading my poem... thanks for pointing out my usage of the word city... I think I need some different words that mean the same thing. and those ...

thanks for editing this! I like your signature, by the way, I love that song! This has started out as a short story, but I'm fairly sure that I might ...

thanks for taking the time to read this! it's ok if you're not good at the editing thing, niether am i! but thanks anyways.

thanks, all of you... and no, it wasn't intentional... but i get it.

no problem

thanks to you too, I'm sure i know how to spell dandelions, just not very late at night. Thanks again!

thanks! I know some of it doesn't rhyme, but I'm not the world's best rhymer... and I know the word 'powered kinda stands out... i'll have to try and fix ...

thanks! I will definately work on this poem, this review is really going to help me. So, I'll just PM you the second copy after i've worked on it a ...

that's hilarious... I've had a conversation with a robot like that, but it wasn't nearly as strange as these.

thanks alot, i can totally see what you're saying. i've written alot of poems, but very few are all that good. so thanks again for the critique.

Wow, your first poem? It was pretty good for the first one you've written! Anyways, I think it's kind of vague... If you maybe made the ending a tad bit ...

yeah, I know haikus are supposedly supposed to 'connect with nature' but this IS an experiment, just to use a different form of poetry. But anyways, thanks for the review ...

This was a fairly good poem, but all the commas just really got on my nerves. That's probably just me, though, so no worries, right? Anyways, I liked this poem ...

thanks! yes, that's exactly what I meant jas.

I agree, this could be a good poem, but right now it's all over the place and there isn't any punctuation at all. Maybe a tad bit more work, creating ...