KaatiieBugg

wow, i did like this poem. it's sort of a love poem, but it's not a sappy "HE loves me!" kind of love poem. It's realistic... That said, I do ...

ok so i don't really know how to critique songs and stuff properly, but this was pretty good. i liked the beat and stuff. i don't play guitar so the ...

wow, loved the descriptions in this. I really only found one thing: Charlotte like instantaneous conclusions would it be liked? I guess I agree with everyone else, this was very ...

Ok, wow, that was great! I too, was reading it and could hear like the music and stuff... This would be a really great song. I agree completely with everyone ...

This was simply wonderful, it made me laugh. I love how you made the "evil stepsisters" not so evil, and how it was Cinderella who turns out to be sneaky ...

This was very well written. It's got me wanting to know what happened, and what will happen.... It is very short though, and you could probably lengthen it a bit ...

This was preeetty good... I'm not sure if Aumi is a boy or girl, so that needs to be cleared up. Your descriptions were pretty good, I liked the clear ...

Overall I liked it. There were a couple of grammatical errors, such as in the first line, it should be Poet's, not Poets. I likedd the imagery. and the language ...

I loved this poem. Beautiful words, beautiful. It IS a simple poem like Nolan said, but it is still a great poem. Favorite part: Closed bluebells, holding morning’s promise. this ...

I loved this poem. It was great, and I definately think it is whimsical. I love the imagery and meaning of the poem, and the greatness of it. rofl... Anyways, ...

This was definatly interesting, very... er... bouncy? anyways, I liked the rhyming, but a couple lines seemed a bit forced, what if all my hearts desires turn out to be ...

This is an awesome poem. Now that I know what overdraft is, I mean. The rhythm of the poem was wonderful, I liked the rhyming because it added tons to ...

Wow, this is interesting and very morbid (at least to me), but I like morbid poetry. Good job, I liked the hint of sarcasm in the teller's voice. Favorite Part: ...

Wow, that was very deep, and well thought. I beleive Audy summed up everything I was wondering, except: I remember that. I personally would have just written "I remember" or ...