Justlittleoleme2

Thank you for your lovely comment. ^.^ I'm glad you loved the descriptions, they were my favorite parts to write. :D

Still a little rough, but much much better. ^.^ Keep it up!

Thank for taking the time to review. ^.^

There are kinder and much more constructive ways to critique a weak story. Just saying. It's good to point out the weak spots, and you have made some valid points, ...

No prob. :)

Lovely!Need me some more of this. ;) It should be published, honestly and truly.

Thanks for the review and the compliments!!! And thanks for taking time to write this on a mobile! :) The no period was an accident...but I like the idea of ...

Hello, No. I never published a Haiku before. :) Where I live it rains ALL THE TIME. There is no summer rainy. There is spring rainy, Fall rainy, Winter Rainy. ...

Thanks for the review! I tired to iron it out a bit. :) I guess I never thought of an ellipses being a bad thing. I use them for pauses ...

Thank you so much! I think I fixed all errors you pointed out. ^.^ I even fixed some other stuff too.

Sweet ^.^

No review, just got to say, Like like like like, gah, like like...you've reduced me to monosyllabic communication, GAahhhhhhhhh. Beautiful job! Really love it! Truly, this should be published some ...

Thank you!!!! ^.^