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Re: Revenge
Hi Paper and Pencil! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you :). Pah, no reviews yet? :( No fair. As i walked to ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: n1
Shinigamizm! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). Claeren is right! This poem has a rather dramatic flare to it, and I love it. Stories are ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: What Would You Say
Summer! Welcome to YWS! It's June here :). Wow, this is the type of poem that brings tears to my eyes. It's amazing! I really like it, it's so delicate, ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Li'l Demon
Hi again, Me Against the World! June here again! Yay! This reminds me of a short story of mine that's in progress. It's called "The Monster in Me," and it ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: deleated
Hi Erica! I'm June, nice to meet you! Wow, how very touching! I hope you got a good grade for this poem, dear, because it's amazing! Let's get this reviewed: ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: One big, not-so-happy family.
Hey Fragile! June here! Surprisingly, I don't remember ever reviewing you. Maybe it's just my bad memory, or maybe I never did it. Either way, let's get on with the ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Fly
Hi there, Me against the world! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you, dear :). This is cute! Instead of using formal language and saying, "I ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Untraceable
Hi there, Offering! I'm June-- nice to meet you. I don't think I've reviewed you before; I'm not sure if I have, but either way, here it goes. This is... ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Controversial
Hi Jon! Guess who? :P I've finally found some time to review, so! Let's have a stab at this :twisted: Controversial is for the brave, The one who changes -- ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Neverwere. Chapter 1
Hey there, Eraqio! June here again :). So! Reading over this, I noticed a few errors, so, I'll point those out in bold. And, since your paragraphs are rather lengthy, ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: I walk alone yet find myself with company.
Hi Eraqio! It's June here :). Now let's begin, I promise not to shred this, but I might be a little overboard with the mechanics here. Let's see: One day ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The Garden Chapel
Hey there! It's June! I figured I haven't done enough long reviews lately, so I decided I should do a few. I don't think I've reviewed anything of yours, either, ...
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: Plain Jane [Prologue]
Monkiiiiiii! It's June here! Now, I don't think I've reviewed much of anything by you, and if I have, it was probably poetry? Anyway! Let's tear this up! :twisted: All ...
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: Center
Hey there Princess! It's June! Yay! Poetry by you is always enjoyable. Nevertheless, I still have my nitpicks, haha. I won't be harsh, dear, let's go: Her eyes opened wide ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: Princess Jade
Hey Sparrowrules! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you. Once upon a time, in the magical land of Iraelle, there was a princess. Her name was ...
Feb 25, 2009
