Juniper

Your majesty, June here. Okie dokie! So. If I had found this poem without your username attached, I believe that I would be able to tell who wrote it. You ...

Hi Rawry! June here again =D I like this poem a lot more than your other one, dear! It's fresh and new, and original, and fun to read, and-- anyway! ...

Hey there Rory! June here! I like the concept you're using here. It's somewhat fresh, but I feel like it's presented a little flatly. It's not feeling poetic to me, ...

Shiiiiiiina! June here to [s]murder[/s] review your work! Yay! 50 second poems for the win! One day, I'm going to challenge you to write 5 poems in 5 minutes. Hey, ...

Hi there, Knightly Angel! June here! Wow, you were twelve when you wrote this? Tell your twelve-year-old self that she was a pretty downright good poet! This is impressive! I ...

How very creative! Hi there, I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you, dear. I liked this a lot. The whole idea of giving us something to ...

Hi there! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you :). First off, poems about nature always win me over, even if they're not written well. *squee!* ...

Hi again, JustMe! June here! Wow! This was downright impressive! I really enjoyed this from start to finish-- you captured my interest at the beginning and sustained it throughout the ...

Hi JustMe! June here! Let's take a look at this! Okie dokie! Refrain from beginning lines, especially opening lines, with a conjuction such as "and". It's not liked, and it ...

Hi there, Telle! I'm June! I like this alot-- if it's based on your life, and I see that it is, I appreciate it more. Poetry like this holds honesty ...

Hiya Writing! June here =). So. I agree with both Niteowl and Krupp. The rhyming isn't actually working here. Instead of adding to this, it's restricting you. You have some ...

Hi there Krupp! June here! When I first clicked on this, I wasn't quite sure what to expect, and I dare say that my expectations were quite low. I'm impressed. ...

Hi there muffinman! I'm June! Welcome to YWS =) I really enjoyed this! I do not have much constructive criticism on this at all, it was quite well done. For ...

Monki, Monki, MonKI! Juniper here =D Yay! Another poem by you to shred into fine bits! Mwaha! Let's get chopping! The memories- Sometimes They're so vivid, I can't even tell ...

Hi VUZFEK! June here =} So! This is quite an emotional poem. I assume it's based on a heartbreak? Memories flash through my head in a blur While hurt fills ...