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Re: Ideas!
Hey there, Vera, This could be an interesting idea for a storybook. Goodluck getting it running. I'd like to mention, however, that things like this for storybooks and such can ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: The Tree of Hope
Hey Baile :) This is a very, very interesting piece. Very insightful. I must ask, though, was it intentional to have the flowers bloom in summer and the fruits in ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: A Dragon's Personality
Hey Werecat! June here! I saw you around the forums reviewing, so, I decided to review this for you. :D Strength and heart, Wise and smart, Intelligent and knowing; Claws ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Always by your side
Hey Misfit! June here (I promised I would review something of yours!) I think this poem is decent. The theme is very common, and often it is written out in ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Ballet
Hey there Mouse! June here! Let's take a look at this. :D I like this alot, even though you say that it's not really a poem. It's a nice little ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: The Siren of The Wood
Jon! June here, finally! I'm very forgetful of things that I am supposed to review. So, congrats on winning our contest; I'm not sure if the points have been given ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Apology
Hey Erica! June here again! :D Let's have a look at this: I have said no with giving it a chance, and getting to know you. This stanza sounds a ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Don’t Forget the Ladies
Hi JiRuiHe! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to skim over this for you. I like the idea presented here. While it's not an original or new concept ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: A Simple Mistake--Chapter Three
Tiff! Yay! June here! I totally nearly squeaked when I saw this. :P Now! Let's review this: The next day , I awoke to the feeling of my cell phone ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: .
Pinkie Corncob! June here :P. The start of this caught my eye as impressive. As I read through this, Rosey, my interest did not waver. You sustained it throughout, which ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: The Fire and The After
Hi Templeton. :) I'm June. I normally don't read much fanfiction, but this caught my eye. It was very well written, very clear, and very entertaining. However, I don't know ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Runaway Chapter 6 part 1
Lucy! Lucy! June here! Have I ever reviewed you before? It feels like I haven't, but I'm not sure. Either way, here we go. :D (And yes, I hate to ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: What if...?
Hey there, welcome to YWS! I'm June and I'm going to run over this for you. ^_^ Before I begin, I want to mention that YWS has a 2:1 ratio ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Deadwood
Hey there Erica! June here! When I read the title of this, I was totally expecting something like writing deadwood (you know when there's too much excessive words?) :P. Anyway! ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: They say-I say. Rewritten
Hey SciFiGirl, June here! And I'm going to review this for you the best I can =]. This is good. It may be a bit dry and repetitive as you ...
Apr 30, 2009