YEs I did. It was a parody for an English class assingment.
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Did you mean for this to sound like "This is Just to Say" by William Carlos Williams? The rhythm is very much like it and you use some of the same phrases. The rhythm was my favorite thing about the poem. I thought the first 2 stanzas were spot on. I agree with June that the third stanza is a bit confusing.
The way it's written, I think you mean: "After all that you said, I guess I was right." Is that correct? But just because of the phrasing and not because of any incorrect punctuation it seems natural that the reader would interpret it as "'After all,' you said, 'I guess I was right.'" But looking at it, that doesn't even make sense in the context of the poem, does it?
Now I'm confused.
Anyway, sorry. I like it.
-rachel
Hey Erica! June here again! 
Let's have a look at this:
I have said no
with giving it a chance,
and getting to know you.
And which I understand
you are upset
and say you want to be
more than a friend.
Forgie me, but you weren't my type.
After all you said,
I guess I was right.
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