Juniper

Hai Megan! Juniper here! You write a lot of poetry, don't you? You're fairly good at it. I think that one of the main things about the poem that stands ...

JonboY³! Juniper here. So, right, I've seen this song before and I believe I gave you my thoughts on it before? Yes/No? Not sure. Either way, I'm going to jump ...

Hi Anshita! June here! I can't really speak much on this song -- I'm not very good at reviewing lyrics because I can disagree with something that the lyricist wants ...

Hi EmoBear, I just want to let you know that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, meaning that before you submit one piece of yours, you should review two things ...

Hey there Princess! Juniper here! This was beautiful! I especially loved the imagery you've used here; it created a peaceful, peaceful atmosphere that suited the poem exceedingly well. • Little ...

Hey there! June here! This is such a wee piece, I'm afraid to touch it. Nevertheless, I'll dig in. :P 'I would like to meet you today,’ Joe told me ...

Le Kat! Juniper here! =D I don't ever review you enough. *lays scissors, red pen, and harshness on the table* “Sometimes that mountain you’ve been climbin’ is just a grain ...

Hey there! June here! Ryan has pointed out a lot of good stuff here, so I can pretty much do a lazy overall. :P • Things I don't like so ...

Adrian lives! You know, I was just looking back on one of my old, super-repetitive poems and you were one of the two people who reviewed it. I was wondering ...

Hey Flower Child! June here! Time just tickin away to my everlasting pain. - tickin should be ticking here, dear. I understand that sometimes the G is eliminated for effect; ...

Hi helpful! June here! I really, really like this poem. Poems that pertain to nature/animals are my favorite. The only things that I would point out is the close repetition ...

Hey aszx, Is this nonfiction or is it Action/adventure fiction? I'm feeling as if it belongs in non fiction because it seems more like a personal experience, but I'm pretty ...

Hi there, June here! I think this is pretty nicely written. I really like the bottom line of this, but the images of blood, frustration and angst that are used ...

Hey Elijah! June here! I'm glad you decided to post this, but sorry I took so long getting to it. There isn't much here to critique, I found it excellently ...

Hi Ayumi! June here! I try not to be judgmental before reading a piece, but I wasn't expecting much from this. To read this, and get more than what I ...