Juniper

Hi Doogzie! :P June here (Not like you can't see that, but whatever...) (Should this have a PG rating? :P) Like most of your work, I don't have much to ...

Hi Kevin, June here! Welcome to YWS! :) Firstly! YWS strongly advises against posting your full name on the site, even if you are over 18. It's a simple safety ...

Hi Zaddie Caso! June here! So! I think you have a pretty nice start here with decent images and such to play for your audience! However, there's a few things ...

Hey Gluz! This was... interesting! I could really imagine a tone that this is to be put with, and I think that as far a rhythm goes, you'd have a ...

Aaaaashley! First of all, I miss you. You're not around enough! This poem was absolutely cute. :P Honestly, I am not a fan of love poem or anything mushy because ...

Hi, Ambrosia! This was really creative! I like how you set the tone. We could really feel the anticipation in this. ;) You know your feet are moving but can ...

Hi Lake Girls! I'm so sorry for your loss, but I'm glad you were able to write about it. I think this poem is decent, but I really feel like ...

Hi, Shina! I think that you definitely have a load of potential with this poem, but as it stands, I feel like it's kind of in a raw-ish state. I ...

Hi there! I'm June, welcome to YWS! :) To be honest, I do not really enjoy the beginning of lines with "You". It's become redundant here, dear, and it kind ...

Hi, Rai! Wow! If this isn't wonderful! I usually highly dislike rhyming poems because they are so easy to force and sometimes they're just not done well. :P However, this ...

Hi Jasmine! I really thought I had reviewed this already. ;) This is an absolutely beautiful poem, Jasmine. It had an excellent rhythm and flow to it, well balanced out. ...

Hi Dogs! Pay attention to Macs' review. She pointed out the spelling and punctuation slips that can be improved. ;) Firstly, I want to say that this is a pretty ...

Hi Shina! You've been on a poetry spree, have you not? :D This is a rather cute poem, I can definitely see this appreciated as a children's work. There isn't ...

Hey Carly! June here! Hmm, I can't decide if I like this more or don't like it more. XD A lion is... not the most common thing to write a ...

Wow, Gluz. Quite interesting song here. I like your talent for writing heavy metal but-- I think this song is all over the place a bit in the sense that ...