Juniper

Hello, BG! Juniper here to review this. :) Hope I'm not too harsh on you... Tears in their eyes Quiet sobs are heard As watery eyes look towards A wooden ...

Hello, Gun! June here! So! You have a decent poem here, or a decent start to one. This could use a bit of work; for now, it's slightly rough in ...

Hello, Saphy! June here! [You do poetry? I did not know this!] Anyway! I think this is a creative start, dear, but it could use a bit of work. :P ...

Hello, Katie! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, your reviewer for the moment. Before I begin, I want to remind you of the 2:1 ratio policy rule we have here; for ...

Hey Pudin! June here! Welcome to YWS! One dark night she shouted to herself as her beated lke fire and went rigid a stone. Okay! So, the opening of a ...

Hello, Cubed! I apologize for not getting to this sooner. I meant to, but I didn't have the time. You have a really creative idea here, and for the most ...

Hello, Doogzie! I haven't read anything of yours in ages! Great to see more of your work, at last. Beautiful opening. Very poetic and subtle, but extremely effective. The sea ...

Hi, Game changer! June here! It's an okay poem. I honestly didn't get much for it other than a person speaking of the aftermath of a heartache of some sort. ...

Hello, Vera! June here! :) I think you have a decent work here, but of course, it could use some improvement. For now, it's a bit rough, but it can ...

Hey, Joe! June here! Haven't read anything of yours in a while. Good to see you around here. :) I think this poem is great. There isn't much that can ...

Hello, Abby! I'm June, welcome to YWS! Definitely a nice improvement from your previous, though you still have room to improve. Rhyme is your crutch here; it's restricting you, and ...

Hello, Georgie! Welcome to YWS, I'm June. :) I think that you have a decent idea here, and with a bit of work, it can work . However, as it ...

Hey James! June here! So, I'm reviewing this because your Marriage: Who needs it essay is a bit tough for me to review seeing as I haven't read the essay ...

Hey Adam! I'm reviewing this because it's your most recent. You seriously need to write more... other than BOG. I could also cheat and just... like, link you to the ...

Hellooooo GSP! You have the honor of receiving my 800th review-- except, I'm not so sure if that's an honor. Anyway, I do kind of hate to drag up an ...