Juniper

Hello, Kaydee! I can't say that I enjoyed the narrative style in this. I felt that it was too tell-y, as if you're just giving us this information to do ...

Emoticon -- Remember proper grammar when you write; the pronoun I should always be capitalized. Edgar Alan Poe often left it uncapitalized for stylistic effect -- or he never really ...

Penguez, As I said to you in chat, you're one of those writers with writings that are to be enjoyed, not criticized. To speak, I enjoyed this -- it's short. ...

STOP! It's Chiko time! She’s waiting for the bus, I can tell, a bag at her feet and her arms wrapped around herself. She’s wearing a sweatshirt, but it’s too ...

Marz Smarz, How I adore haiku. And thee. :P I'm quite particular when it comes to reading them, but I must highly credit you on these. It's difficult to cramp ...

Mat! Only one review on this? Bad! > The three of them ignore my words. They drag me inside. Seeing as he's in his house when this takes place, should ...

Domi, Here I [finally] am. I was pretty much awed while reading this -- your writing style is very fluent and entrancing, but we shall save the praise for later. ...

Good day, Aunna, This wasn't bad, but I felt that you lingered too long on one idea before moving on to the next. You pretty much stated that the person ...

Hey there, To describe love and hearts in the same ways that they've been done for the past handful of years easily becomes tedious to read over and over again. ...

Hello, Ela! I've seen you reviewing around the forums and I figured I would swoop in for a review. I would say to try not to narrate your poems like ...

Hi Auna, I'm June, your critic for the moment. This isn't a bad start to a poem, though I think it could stand to some improvement. To begin, I've heard ...

Tiffany, It's impossible to critique the content on this. It's touching. [[Your hands are cold, gripping my arms[[[ as a ]]]vice, while my eyes remain closed.]] I feel like [as ...

Hey there! Fair job done here. I'm a touch biased, haha - it's rather difficult for me to appreciate love poems because they're such a common topic that it's so ...

Nutty, Only direct nitpick >> A kick to the stomach, I gritted my teeth and bared it. I'm not sure if you're talking about baring teeth, if which it should ...

Pengu, As I have verbalized to you in chat, I really cannot critique this. I echo Kylan on the use of your tilde; replace it with a dash, and jaundiced ...