Juniper

Well, I didn't like the way Heart of a Leopard was going, so I changed the beginning 100% (reason the title has changed). Enjoy! And a note to all future ...

(First of all welcome to YWS! I like this poem a lot! Very nice! It's a very good base for a poem, but it also has the potential for you ...

I will go ahead and say this: to really enjoy this you should probably read 'My Dearest Madelyn' before you read this. But it's not mandatory and doesn't affect the ...

(Hey there Kylan! I am reviewing , not critiquing this piece. You are one of those amazing writers who don't have flaws.) [hillcrest orchard] he thinks that he is a ...

What!? I reviewed this yesterday as soon as you posted it and my internet must have not let it go through. I am so disappointed! Anyway, the only slight errors ...

(Hey there! June here! I'm going to critique this for you, although Suz has covered most of it already!) (In my opinion, it was a good, quick poem, but it ...

(Hey there! Welcome to YWS! We have a 2:1 policy here which means that for every one piece of work you post, you should have completed two reviews. Please try ...

Sometimes I lay in my bunk and wonder what my life would have been like if the Marines hadn't come for me. Would I have been a Scientist? Or a ...

I've been meaning to start this story for a while, this is the very beginning of it. I don't think I'm going to split it up into chapters, I think ...

I literally have not written for a year! I feel extremely rusty while I was writing this. Well, rip it apart if you have to. Just want to see how ...

Oh my god! I'm so nervous about posting this. I have about thirty pages more, but this is just the first part of the prologue. (Never fear, we're here to ...

(Hey there Pengu! I don't think I have ever reviewed anything by you before, but here we go :).) Lonely bones of old maids (This is awesome; made me laugh) ...

First of all, i need this critiqued for my English class. Second of all, its framework is based off of the poem "Women Who Love Angels" by Judith Cofer. Thanks. ...

Okay, so I just got this idea and decided to post it. I know it needs a lot of work and I was hoping you guys could give me some ...

(Hey Jon! It's not every day I read poems about the earth ^_^ this made me smile. I am going to try not to kill it; I'll just pick at ...