Juniper

I believe the proper rating for this is PG-13 or R? It's hard to tell what this poem is about. I can see that the beginning of the lines read ...

Colors of Love (Hey there! I'm June and I'm going to be reviewing this for you! ) I: Red Red is that night on the boardwalk Red is putting flowers ...

(Hey Esteria! I'm June, and I'm going to be critiquing this for you today. As Princess and Conrad pointed out, this poem does seem a tad flat. It needs to ...

(Hey there KBaby! I'm June and I'm to be your reviewer today. I liked this poem; it was short, sweet, and not too cliche. I think it just lacked a ...

(Hey there Voxina! I like how you turned a difficulty you face into a poem. Very good. Now, while the poem is great, there's a few things that need fine ...

(Hey there Sarah dear! First off, I shall have to carrot-stab you for giving me something genius to critique. Anyway, on with the... review!) She should have known better. That ...

(Hey there ghost! I'm June and I'm going to be your critiquer today! I have to say, I agree with Snoink-- I was halfway disappointed when this wasn't about sparrows! ...

(Hey there write to live! As Jigity said, there isn't much to work with here. I believe that this could be an incredible start for a nice big poem if ...

(Hey there Warrior! I love this poem! It is perfectly versed and written-- good job. Since there is basically nothing to nit-pick, I'll point out what I love.) From my ...

(Hey there break~my~heart! A beautiful poem! I loved this! You asked for punctuation advice, and seeing that there's nothing else to change in this poem I'll throw in a few ...

(Hey there Silencer! Nice to meet you! I'm June and I'll be critiquing your poem here;) () Your heart can be painted with a red stroke But for mine you ...

(Hey there Jigs! I don't think I've ever reviewed something by you-- which I'm pretty glad I haven't because there's nothing to nit-pick at in your work. The only nit-picks ...

(Hey there! Welcome to YWS; I'm June and I will be your critiquer today. ) (So, I think you have a nice idea for a poem here, but I just ...

First off: Is the rating appropriate?? Brief summary : Jonah is a vampire - get that straight. Ellen is a bored teenager living in Raymond, Washington (okay this is going ...

(Hey there Vannah! Welcome to YWS! We have a 2:1 policy here which means that for every one piece of work you post you should have reviewed two pieces of ...